How do movies or television influence people’s behavior? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Television is the one of the most popular entertainment around the world which can influence in people lives. We spend hours every week watching television so it will affect our behavior. unfortunately, the effect of the television is negative.it makes people stupid, more violent, more inactive
Television teach people to sit back and accept instead of acting and thinking. Receiving quick information, opinion, analysis and criticism for about everything allow us to stop thinking about events. You rarely find program on TV that require you to think. In addition, television feeds you false information so sometime you maybe judgement before the fact instead of after that. For example, you decide to change your refrigerator so you prefer to choose the one which you see on television advertisement. After few weeks you find out that the refrigerator is not good as well as you saw. It seems television weaken your thought ability and lead to make wrong decision.
Many programs and movies on television are violent and some of them are not suitable for whole family members. When you see violence on television over and over you become less sensitive about it. Eventually violence doesn’t seem wrong. For example, actors can be killed and come back for another movie so sometimes you confused and forget that death is permanent. For another example, the violence of heroes is shown acceptable because they try to rescue the world (heroes can disobey any law to achieve their aim) children learn from heroes and they believe that breaking the law is a way of success.
Watching television make viewers inactive because they don’t involve any activity during the TV program. Watchers just turn it on and change the channel so after a while they become victim of disease because they are sitting motionless in front of TV for hours. For example, people prefer to stay at home and following sports competition instead of getting exercise or talking a walk.
Television can undoubtedly influence in people behavior in many aspects.TV programs can make watchers more stupid, more violent and more inactive so watchers must be aware of that consequences.
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Discourse Markers used:
['may', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'for example', 'in addition', 'as well as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.241025641026 0.229887763892 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.171794871795 0.158761421928 108% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0717948717949 0.0866891130778 83% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0641025641026 0.046263068375 139% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0717948717949 0.0685040099705 105% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135897435897 0.118717715034 114% => OK
Participles: 0.0358974358974 0.0351676179071 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.71052268153 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0230769230769 0.0309702414327 75% => OK
Particles: 0.0025641025641 0.00188951952338 136% => OK
Determiners: 0.0641025641026 0.0887237588012 72% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0179487179487 0.0209618222197 86% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00769230769231 0.0139019557991 55% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2173.0 2387.08602151 91% => OK
No of words: 353.0 408.028673835 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.15580736544 5.86048508987 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48200974243 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.393767705382 0.338922669872 116% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28895184136 0.251872472559 115% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.209631728045 0.174417080927 120% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118980169972 0.112833075102 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71052268153 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 212.727598566 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543909348442 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 59.3989016999 59.2087087015 100% => OK
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6684587814 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.6111111111 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.377246973 48.84282405 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.722222222 120.699889404 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6111111111 20.5533526081 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.388888888889 0.644075263715 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.54480286738 54% => OK
Readability: 48.5062952471 45.7405998639 106% => OK
Elegance: 1.34166666667 1.45489161554 92% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184944491435 0.300154397459 62% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0956832059661 0.103427244359 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0711769718421 0.0752933317313 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.50309921191 0.497263757937 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181754340506 0.151897553556 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719960071517 0.114077575197 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418748039989 0.0781384742642 54% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.25153910486 0.336927656856 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0858275631546 0.067059652881 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112372097463 0.210909579961 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152851981255 0.0618886996521 25% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 11.8870967742 17% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.86379928315 259% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.91756272401 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 8.42114695341 24% => More positive topic words wanted.
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.4623655914 244% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.75985663082 181% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.6433691756 95% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.