If universities are given financial support to develop researches,
which one do you think would receive more benefits?
To predict weather more accurately
To clean rivers and oceans.
To deal with outer space
BY and large, it is established beyond doubt that with the dawn in human civilization, the environment is nurturing the human beings. In this regard, meticulous usage of resources is of paramount importance. There are different schools of thoughts among people. Where some reckon that future research need to be focus on improving marine environment, or some even beings imaginative to surf the space.On the other hand, others contempolate to initiate the develepments after accurate weather prediction. As for this writer's opinion, I would subscribe to the latter idea. In what follows, I will delve into the most crucial reasons to substantiate my viewpoint.
The first reasons corroborating my stance in associated with the notion that disbursing funds for accurate weather prediction will results in plethora of advantages.To be more specific, weather forecast will accelerate the agricultural developement. For instance, farmers are able to grow the variety of crops, and harvest the crops at rights time. Not only it will enhance the net producation of crops, but it can also aid people to avoidd certian unexpected situations. It is notable that in tis contemporary life, it is arduous for people to take out their time for vaccations. If they take out time and their plan ruined because of unexpected rainstorm, it resulted in depression and anger in them. By knowing weather accurately people can plan their vaccation. Moreover, World can avoid many dangerous circumstances, if only they are alkerted of imminent danger. By the way of illustartion, people can plan better to avoid hurricane, storms and tornados.
The second compelling rationale behind my opinion is rooted in the fact that initiating research for cleaning oceans or exploring space is wastage of resources and eventually impractical.It is axiomatic that we should solve the current problems first before foreseeing the future. Consuming funds fot space exploration would be not just wastage of time and money but such kind of research need patience and high technological equipments.It is also worth mentioning that marine life is part of our natural ecosystem, preventing them is as necessary as balancing natural environment. Government can regulate policies through which people are aducated to create less pollution in the oceans and sees. Furthermore, revenue obtained from agricultural development can be utilized to start educating people about saving marine life. It is crystal clear to see how much research in weather predication would be profitable.
By perusing above paragraph, one can infer that though solving others issue might be important but the urgent need is to solve imminent problems. For the sake of brevity, few points are worth reiteraring. First, stimulating research projects for weather forecast will have myriad of advantages. Second, spending on other researches is not a dire situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, so, as for, for instance, kind of, by and large, by the way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 9.8082437276 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2449.0 1977.66487455 124% => OK
No of words: 452.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41814159292 4.8611393121 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00829234169 2.67179642975 113% => OK
Unique words: 266.0 212.727598566 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588495575221 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 769.5 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7166127545 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.47826087 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.652173913 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69565217391 5.45110844103 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138852145562 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0333467301529 0.076458572812 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374344476353 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0782142127763 0.150856017488 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240986142154 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 10.9000537634 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.01818996416 117% => OK
difficult_words: 138.0 86.8835125448 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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