If you could invent something new, what product would you develop? Use specific details to explain why this invention is needed.
Since the dawn of humanity, human beings are following the inventions that lead them to a brilliant future as well as brings them a kind of hope and happiness, because achieving to the ideals and desires are not feasible in today's competitive world. People have the trends to diverse creations according to their requires, wise and conceptions. With this in mind, inventions have a great role in opening human's eyes to the world and extends their horizons. As far as I am concerned, if I have an ability to invent a product, I would like create a device that increase the efficiency of solar panels to produce electricity using solar radiations. I have already dreamed to create such device and I have named it "PV". There are several important reasons to inventing that thing, among which economical situations, environmental issues, and investing money in crucial sections of the society have significant importance to the humanity.
As we know, although the idea of generating of electricity power from solar systems have been established several years ago, the efficiency of this technology reaches to ten-percent in its maximum condition and cannot transfer all irradiance to the power. Accordingly, the power generation procedures is depended on diesel generators in the power plants. As a result, the amount of air pollutant such as carbon dioxide increases and creates considerable problems for both of humans and other nature creatures. In today's world, most of countries are moving to the minimum uses of oil, gas, and coal in power generation process. However, inventing this device can affect great deal of fossil fuels and prevent from air pollution and is recognized as a hopeful device for next generations.
Some people may assert that extending of this device in first stages need a great deal of money and investments, but it can diversely affect the economical situations of families and lead their lives to the convenient and tranquility future. Inventing this product has significant qualities such as each home can provide its electricity without or less need to the external power grids, selling surplus power to the main grid and receive money from the regional electric companies every month, and even enhance their knowledge about one of the important technologies, namely renewable energies which are known as green energies., to name but a few. Therefore, creating this device in bulk can increase the incomes especially poor families during the short-term planning.
Last but not least, government can invest a huge extent of wealth only from producing of power through PV technology every year and spend it in various sections of the society which feels a critical need to the investment. From other point of view, this product can bring independence to the country through lack of need to foreign countries in establishing modern as well as very expensive power plants and the government not only budget in other medical context but also create dependency among other countries that supply their demands by purchasing and investing money in the country. As a result, the country can grow in diverse environments like industrial sections and creates a dynamic and mobility in the society among the young adults.
To sum up, although PV is a device that envisage in my mind and has never been discovered in today's world, it can lead both humans' life and a country's independency to the considerable advancement. Therefore, inventing this technology may has important role in economical and environmental situations and bring a sense of joyfulness and hope among the people. Obviously, taking great budget to the inventions is essential to affects the future life of any society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the countries') or simply say ''most countries''.
Suggestion: most of the countries; most countries
...ature creatures. In today's world, most of countries are moving to the minimum uses of oil, ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in the society among the young adults. To sum up, although PV is a device that ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'so', 'therefore', 'well', 'kind of', 'such as', 'as a result', 'as well as', 'to sum up']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272327964861 0.229887763892 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.125915080527 0.158761421928 79% => OK
Adjectives: 0.106881405564 0.0866891130778 123% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0380673499268 0.046263068375 82% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0292825768668 0.0685040099705 43% => OK
Prepositions: 0.115666178624 0.118717715034 97% => OK
Participles: 0.0439238653001 0.0351676179071 125% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.95363301327 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0351390922401 0.0309702414327 113% => OK
Particles: 0.00146412884334 0.00188951952338 77% => OK
Determiners: 0.099560761347 0.0887237588012 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0175695461201 0.0209618222197 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0102489019034 0.0139019557991 74% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 3763.0 2387.08602151 158% => OK
No of words: 603.0 408.028673835 148% => OK
Chars per words: 6.24046434494 5.86048508987 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.9554069778 4.48200974243 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.391376451078 0.338922669872 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.30679933665 0.251872472559 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.218905472637 0.174417080927 126% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.175787728027 0.112833075102 156% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95363301327 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 299.0 212.727598566 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495854063018 0.524397521467 95% => OK
Word variations: 61.571849297 59.2087087015 104% => OK
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6684587814 97% => OK
Sentence length: 30.15 20.5533526081 147% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.5075873826 48.84282405 175% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.15 120.699889404 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.15 20.5533526081 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.644075263715 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.54480286738 36% => OK
Readability: 60.829933665 45.7405998639 133% => OK
Elegance: 2.23484848485 1.45489161554 154% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0719516540352 0.300154397459 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10951157307 0.103427244359 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0630974211195 0.0752933317313 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.581437566142 0.497263757937 117% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.119615914548 0.151897553556 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383239039148 0.114077575197 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263881099885 0.0781384742642 34% => The sentences are too close to each other.
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.455995864733 0.336927656856 135% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0330154441482 0.067059652881 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0571064295971 0.210909579961 27% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0190565918094 0.0618886996521 31% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8870967742 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.86379928315 26% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.91756272401 61% => OK
Positive topic words: 11.0 8.42114695341 131% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.4623655914 41% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 2.75985663082 72% => OK
Total topic words: 14.0 13.6433691756 103% => OK
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30