If you could study a subject that you have never had the opportunity to study, what would you choose? Explain your choice, using specific reasons and details.
For me as an electrical engineer thanks to the lessons I have learned, medical science is very attractive and challenging. If I could have a chance to study a new subject, I would choose medicine for the below reasons.
In high school, I liked biology very much. Also one of my best favorites was math. Because of economic situations and job opportunities in my country, I had to select math and then, in the university, electrical engineering was my field of study. Now, after 10 years, I'm satisfied of my chose, however, the love of biology is something that always I regret, yet now. Medicine and also surgery is something different for engineers that could be charming too.
Since medicine is related to disease and people I believe that it could be active for me. Also, along with new technologies and developments, there are many challenges and problems that doctors should solve. In recent decades, new and undefined diseases are the topics of surgery world. Therefore, this subject is the best way for me to make myself in to new challenges. Using my professional skills, implementation of new instrument in the area of surgery is something appropriate to my talent and abilities.
I always enjoy doing with real things and use my hands. Although power electronic is something very coordinated by this moral, but, when I see surgery films, I feel my passion to try it. As well, I'm fairly active and brave. This specification is something essential for the surgery. In spite of difficulties in medicine, when you are able to cure a patient or help some one hopeless, feeling satisfied and confidence is the result. To be honest, the enjoy of treating people and returning the life to others is something indescribable.
The last and perhaps least, I would choose medicine because of the income and better facilities that doctors have. In fact, in our country physician is worthy and most of doctors have better financial facilities. In comparison with engineering, doctors earn more money and are in welfare. According to the statistics, the social level of doctors and their income are much better than any other jobs.
To sum up, if it was a chance to select a new t to study, I would give myself an opportunity to try medicine. Believing to this valuable sentence' never late to mend'. What is more interesting than medicine for a curious and active person?
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the doctors') or simply say ''most doctors''.
Suggestion: most of the doctors; most doctors
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, i feel, in fact, in spite of, to sum up, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 15.1003584229 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1968.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 405.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85925925926 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48604634366 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84897401695 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538271604938 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 4.94265232975 283% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7935851901 48.9658058833 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.72 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16 5.45110844103 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142591275597 0.236089414692 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342310929475 0.076458572812 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451666441316 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719061534552 0.150856017488 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374550234259 0.0645574589148 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 58.1214874552 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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