In some countries, people are no longer allowed to smoke in many public places and office buildings. Do you think this is a good rule or a bad rule? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.
some people think that banning smoke in public places is unfair and it is the right of smokers to smoke in every where they want. but in my opinion, since smoking is a harmful action and not only heart the smoker, but, also bothers the others, should be banned in public places like offices, buses, theaters, shops and so on. Also banning smoking is one of rules that should be executed in public. Below, some explanations are referred.
There are some rules that must be enforced in public places. People have to respect some social rules when they want to use a public place. in fact, these rules provide the discipline and avoid mess. there fore, it allows people to use public facilities in a way that all can benefit and not to deprive somebody of their right. as like respecting driving rules or special uniform at work, smoking in public places is another immorality actions that should be banned.
The second and perhaps the most important reason to point out is that smoking is harmful for every one who is around the smokers. as well, some people have allergies to cigarette smoke. in fact, it hearts their breath and lungs and in some cases makes them coughing or even breathlessness. Furthermore, smoking is detrimental for the smokers. So, it should be banned in public. Smokers should use cigarette in every where that is not common with other people such as free air. Though, it is the right of smokers but, to live in society people should limit some of their demands. The cigarette smoke pollute the air in a surrounded place and destroy the appearance of the space.
Another aspect of banning smoking in public is its cultural effects. Although, fewer smoking may cause financial loss for some, for instance, importers and distributors, and they are the biggest barriers of this action, but, it is one of the best paces to improve public health and decrease the number of young smokers.
To conclude, I should postulate that smoking is one of harmful actions that should be stopped in the country. Besides its dangers to the smoker and others, it is the violation of social rules. The consequences of banning smoking is a culture that should be expanded in society to avoid youngsters of smoking.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, in fact, such as, in my opinion, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1834.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 385.0 407.700716846 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76363636364 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41937142053 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47012987013 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 618.680645161 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.6265599709 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3636363636 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.45454545455 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239577733481 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840183967264 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587670382452 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144374019338 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833331694287 0.0645574589148 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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