If you could travel back in time, what person would you like to meet?
Travelling back in time is always an amazing dream for everybody. Everyone has had that dream before. Going back to the past either to fix a drawback or to improve something else, that is the way people may think about the subject. However, if I could go back in time, I would enjoy meeting Sr. Isaac Newton.
Firstly, he was one of the best genius of the science history. His brilliant mind found out many important discoveries not only to physics but to science. For instance, he postulated the attraction law, what was proven further. Such law was necessary for the development of the industrial revolution, made then by René Descartes. Therefore, he could teach me and I might be able to foresee the humankind future.
Secondly, as his student, I would be able to bring to present day all his original materials and I would teach other students. This way everybody would be at the same level as mine and thus we might build a better country.
Thirdly, Isaac Newton had many other influences in life. He used to speak with Copernicus and Galileo Galilei. At his studies, he included studies from the bible trying to preview what was going to happen in the future. And, as a scientist, he realized that the more he knew the more he could see the future. Then, keeping in touch with him, I would be able not only fathom his life but many other scientists lives.
Finally, all in all, I would love going back in time to meet Isaac Newton, to learn with him and about his life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, thus, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.0286738351 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 52.1666666667 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 267.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55056179775 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42539367369 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 212.727598566 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588014981273 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 618.680645161 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.7836352703 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.4705882353 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7058823529 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11764705882 5.45110844103 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166928143345 0.236089414692 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538705557357 0.076458572812 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709109287925 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104082065464 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701005282628 0.0645574589148 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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