If you want to choose a purpose, which one do you choose?
• Helping other people
• Enhancing time management
• Improving physical well-being and eating healthy food
In our sophisticated era, having a purpose in each individual's life leads them to being hopeful. Which kind of goals that people choose, have drastic relationship with the humans conditions. At my today condition, I personally prefer to concentrate on improvement of my physical condition and care about my daily diet. In the following paragraphs the most outstanding reasons for my point of view will be explained.
First remarkable thing that substantiated my standpoint is, if I want to be an effective person for society, First of all, I should be healthy. Having healthier lifestyle provides people with the opportunity to be more confident and motivation. It also Increase their energy in their routine life. To bring into more vivid picture, my personal experience would be a great example. I have started to work out for three years which has fantastic influence in my life for this past three years. During this time my self-confidence is surprisingly increased and it lead me to making best decisions in my life. Indeed, I feel younger and it brings me to act as an experienced one meanwhile looked at my early twenties. It also has been proven by scientist that Physical activities release serotonin in body which keeps human looked younger. It would be more effaceable when both healthy regimen and exercising correlating with to gather. Since, I tend to be an effective person, preference of healthy lifestyle is logical goal.
Another worthy point to be mentioned here is that healthy diet and physical well-being helps to less pollution released into the environment. Although the sound of these Idea is wired, it would be need deep thinking to illustrate. To shed the light on this point, healthy diets like Vegans leads most of harmful human activities reduce and they also act as e environmental friendly. For example, Vegans do not eat meet at all and this approach decrease the need for livestock which is the most effective one in the global warming. On the other hand, working out make people relaxed and calm. This helps people to avoid social anxiety to control the criminal behavior in society. For example, when I do exercise I feel energized and I do not want to ruin my motivation by yelling at a person who has miserable driving in the road.
To take all the aforementioned into conclusion, by choosing improvement of physical well-being not only I can motivate myself, but also I can make a great chance to keep environment clean. I also find out that this choice cover other options, too.
28. Recently the school principals find out that the students are cheating in their homework
assignments. To prevent this, which of the following actions do you th
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 51, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...histicated era having a purpose in each individuals life leads them to being hopeful Which ...
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Line 2, column 135, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to have'
Suggestion: to have
... Which kind of goals that people choose have drastic relationship with the humans co...
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Line 4, column 249, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'increases'?
Suggestion: Increases
...e more confident and motivation It also Increase their energy in their routine life To b...
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Line 4, column 552, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'leads'?
Suggestion: leads
...idence is surprisingly increased and it lead me to making best decisions in my life ...
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Line 6, column 163, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this Idea' or 'these ideas'?
Suggestion: this Idea; these ideas
...o the environment Although the sound of these Idea is wired it would be need deep thinking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, well, while, for example, i feel, kind of, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2203.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 453.0 407.700716846 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86313465784 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61343653406 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77342475269 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520971302428 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.59856630824 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 20.6003584229 5% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 453.0 20.1344086022 2250% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 48.9658058833 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 2203.0 100.406767564 2194% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 453.0 20.6045352989 2199% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 106.0 5.45110844103 1945% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 11.8709677419 8% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228906942622 0.236089414692 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.228906942622 0.076458572812 299% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0737576698707 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108168567463 0.150856017488 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543488486514 0.0645574589148 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 228.0 11.7677419355 1937% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -379.86 58.1214874552 -654% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.10430107527 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 178.8 10.1575268817 1760% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.39 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 29.97 8.01818996416 374% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 111.0 86.8835125448 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 60.0 10.002688172 600% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 183.2 10.0537634409 1822% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.247311828 293% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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