Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Providing Internet access is just as important as other services, such as building roads, so governments should offer Internet access to all of their citizens at no cost.
In recent era, the advance of science and technology is beyond recognition that enables humankind to perform its demands to everything at a matter of second. Today, the application of internet is almost inevitable for us to run of life in right circumstance. With advant of internet to life, we can meets a lot of staff such as communication, education, research, industrial monitoring, financing and etc. human sometimes have lost its orientation to handle technology for right application or maybe this meets with internet. I definitely disagree with statement that goverenment should invest on free internet for everyone. I will explain my perspective about this idea for following reason.
First of all, the time is an invaluable factor is for everyone that nothing in the world disable to change or replace it. I am believing that plenty of us will be know the value of everythings when we pay price of it. I can manage time when I have some concern about cost of it in using of Internet. This forceful can save my valuable time and money. Also, some of people do not control their time for using of Interent particularly when are in the social networks such as Facebook or Instegram. If the government release the using up of internet free for everyone maybe someone apply it useless while others needs internet for useful way.
Secondly, I strongly believe that the government should invest people's budget on fundamental demands. to put in another way, There are a lot of needs for people to meet such as food, health or home compared to free internet that government must pay attention to it. For example, In a far-reaching village that have not proper basic construction for hygiene, food, employe and the others. The higher manager must provide primary needs compared to internet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 300, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'meet'
Suggestion: meet
...With advant of internet to life, we can meets a lot of staff such as communication, e...
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Line 1, column 398, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...earch, industrial monitoring, financing and etc. human sometimes have lost its orientati...
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Line 1, column 580, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...disagree with statement that goverenment should invest on free internet for every...
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Line 2, column 125, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...orld disable to change or replace it. I am believing that plenty of us will be know the valu...
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Line 2, column 358, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'some of', you should use 'the' ('some of the people') or simply say ''some people''.
Suggestion: some of the people; some people
... save my valuable time and money. Also, some of people do not control their time for using of ...
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Line 2, column 580, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'applies'.
Suggestion: applies
...nternet free for everyone maybe someone apply it useless while others needs internet ...
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Line 3, column 103, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: To
... peoples budget on fundamental demands. to put in another way, There are a lot of ...
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Line 3, column 435, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs compared" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'comparing' or 'to be compared'.
Suggestion: comparing; to be compared
...gher manager must provide primary needs compared to internet.
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Line 3, column 457, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ide primary needs compared to internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.0752688172 186% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 302.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95033112583 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80092720242 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559602649007 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.1056547285 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.4375 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 5.45110844103 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180944588559 0.236089414692 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632572660207 0.076458572812 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499977150484 0.0737576698707 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123192186701 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0236723775301 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 11.7677419355 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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