Wild tuna, a species of large ocean fish, have decreased in number because of overfishing Recently, attempts have been made to farm tuna by feeding the fish in ocean cages until they become large enough for sale. However, tuna farming has faced several problems and criticisms.
First, female tuna do not lay eggs in captivity, so tuna farmers must capture large quantities of young wild tuna to stock their farms, further reducing wild tuna populations. These young tuna are caged and fed until they are large enough to be sold. Since the captured females in tuna farms cannot lay eggs to replace the tuna that are sold, tuna farmers continue to catch young wild tuna to keep their farms going and so worsen the decline in wild tuna populations.
In the rrwading stated about that Broccli ususally grown in West of America such As North of America because of suitable environment to grwoth and reproduction. On the other hand another region such east coast is one the sink for consume of broccli that si very far-reaching to transpoprt. Also, In the article stated that maybe it possible to growth of this crop in east coast and will be decrease of high cost of transportation while the summer is very hot to growth. In the lecture professor elaborate her disagreement about this atricle by some reason that as follows.
to begin with, IN the rading stated that if the broccli growth in east coast. the cost of produciton and transportation will be decreased and will a low cost broccli availabe for resident of east coast. In the lecture professor asserted that it is possible to growth broccli but the yield and qulaity is very low to compared to west broccoli. In the west filed the production of this crop is high and it will be cost effective for consumer to use this crop for east coast resindent in spite of cost of transportation.
Moreover, breeders can put soem long term for breeding of broocoli for tolerant and growth in high temperate location such as east coast by bring some usefull genes, traditional teqniques. On the other hand, there are some deliberation about this genetic modified cropss by consumer. In tehe lecture , the speaker rejected this idea becasue the breeding this palnt is very expensive and very a long-shot process. In addition, this process need a high technology and sophisticaed procedur to follow.
Finally, the reading claimed that the fresh broccoli will be content a lot of vitamin and healthy product but when it transported to high distance, the content of healthy compound will decreased. on the other hand, the speaker rebuts because in the east coast there are some native crops that have a lot of healthy compund even more that broccoli that need to pay attention. They can repleace this crop instead of broccli.
In conclude, for all of the reason the professor asseted the growth of broocoli in tthe east coast not profitable for farmer and consumer.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, moreover, so, while, in addition, such as, in spite of, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 30.3222958057 185% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1831.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 376.0 270.72406181 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86968085106 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40348946061 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64045532171 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 145.348785872 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.462765957447 0.540411800872 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 558.0 419.366225166 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 2.5761589404 505% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.199862178 49.2860985944 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.705882353 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1176470588 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88235294118 7.06452816374 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 4.19205298013 191% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0406836704269 0.272083759551 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0149045849434 0.0996497079465 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0159965281101 0.0662205650399 24% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0234228094931 0.162205337803 14% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0128424982177 0.0443174109184 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 53.8541721854 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 63.6247240618 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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