It is clearly understood that in such a sophisticated world, the price of living alone in the big city is very high, so it is difficult for people, especially young people to pay the whole costs by themselves. I think it is very appropriate to say something about my recommendation to my friend here. One of my friends moved out to the big city to study at the university; in the first month of living alone, he had a very big problem with the financial staff. So I recommend a way to reduce his cost of living, I told him is very effective if he lives with another person and finds a roommate to share a room with. In the subsequent paragraphs, I will delve into the most outstanding reasons.
The first important point to be mentioned is that when people start a new life on their own is very difficult for them to pay the whole cost by themselves. Therefore, it is very proper for them to share some things with another person. Also, the price of renting a home in the big cities is very high, so it is necessary for these people to find a roommate and share the rent with each other. For example, when I left my country, and my family to study in another country, I faced many problems in my life, because the price of renting a room was very high and I did not have that much money. Therefore, I decided to find a roommate, I tried that, and finally, I rent a home with one of my classmates in the city. After that, I got peace of mind because the cost of living did not bother me anymore.
Another reason which should be taken into consideration is that roommates can share many things such as a car, bike, books, clothing, and food with each other and that is very good for young people. Also more important any things they could find a good friend, and this kind of friendship is very valuable. I think another example of my personal experience would be very helpful to demonstrate this subject. When I was new in town and lived with my roommate, we share many things with each other and that was not necessary for either of us to buy that stuff by ourselves. For example, we buy dress and both of us use them in a different situation or we share a car so we were able to have a car at that time. Also, we bout food together and cook for each other and that was very good because we saved money and time in this way.
To make this story short, all the aforementioned information led us to how we could make our life easier, make our friendship strong, and find a roommate who could help a person to reduce their living cost; furthermore, they had a better time beside each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 199, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...and that is very good for young people. Also more important any things they could fi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for example, i think, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2100.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.27698574338 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46671547412 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.441955193483 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 675.9 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.6947782735 48.9658058833 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.666666667 100.406767564 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2777777778 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148664868996 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524340903648 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0357344956784 0.0737576698707 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912883659961 0.150856017488 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327030968076 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.84 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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