If you want to recommend a way to reduce living expenses for your friend, which of the following will you choose? Why?
Find a roommate to share a room
Do not buy the latest mobile phone, Buy new technological devices less frequently
Buy cheap foods and cook home (do not often eat outside)
Managing living costs has become the focus of increased attention of young people around the world. The young need to balance their incomes and expenses to handle both current living cost and future needs. A question can be raised in this regard that is what approaches and methods help people to diminish their daily expenses. Among a plethora of options, I prefer finding a roommate to share a room. I concur with this idea and in the ensuing lines, I will delve into two reasons to substantiate my point.
The first reason is that house rents constitute a large portion of the total living cost. In my country house's prices are significantly high related to average incomes. Accordingly, for renting a room, which has rudimentary features, people need to pay much. The government set some regulations on commodity prices and other living costs whereas there are no restricted regulations on real estate industry and prices increased exponentially each year in comparison to total inflation. In my city, Tehran, most of the people must have left their home every year as they are no longer afford to pay increasing rent. Every year the population of countryside growth as people move to cheaper places. My uncle experience is a compelling example of this. He has worked for several years and tried to retain as much as money he could to cope with his living expenses. But, he was not successful until he found a colleague to divide renting expenses. So, by reducing this part of living costs, my friend can handle his/her expenses more effectively.
Secondly, having a roommate bring people some lateral opportunities to decline their costs. People can share other payments such as electricity and building charge bills with his/her roommate. Take, for instance, if an individual wants to buy a new refrigerator which is required for living, s/he can split the cost and saves money. Also, people can share home tasks which are lead to fewer costs. In this regard, partners can cook home and switch this task every week. Thus, it is less boring and frustrating rather than doing it every week alone. As a result, they depend more on domestic food and expense less on restaurant’s foods.
In summary, all aforementioned reasons bring us to conclude that finding a roommate is a superb choice rather than two others options as people can cut the big proportion of their cost and meanwhile get benefited by sharing other daily costs.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, whereas, while, for instance, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95620437956 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65608080549 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4479687744 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5652173913 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8695652174 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4347826087 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129945839876 0.236089414692 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375237296852 0.076458572812 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375992397734 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0794107017344 0.150856017488 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358014814707 0.0645574589148 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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