Some people prefer to focus on ambitious dreams while others think realistic goals are more important. Which do you prefer and why?
Everybody has desired objectives in his/her life and tries to catch them with all of his/her efforts. These prominent goals such as a plethora of money, fine family and great popularity are the stimuli/stimulus make people to sustain a variety of difficulties. A question can be raised in this regard is that what kind of dreams and goals people should pursue. One standpoint idea chooses ambitious dreams, while another perspective prefers realistic goals. I concur with the latter idea and in the ensuing lines, I will delve into two reasons to substantiate my point.
The first reason is that ambitious targets put intense pressures on people which can make them unsatisfied. It is a basic desire in everybody’s life to gain what s/he planned. If you can hit your targets, it will lead to feel successful and have a better sense about your future. In contrast, very challenging goals, which are unreachable, make you nervous and the coming pressure devastate your hopes and motivations. For example, one of my friends decided to launch a company after his graduation as he has imagined it in his dreams. But, he failed and totally lost his confidence in doing demanding works in the future. I think he is talented and has the ability to run businesses but, he should break it down to the minor reachable milestones and then accomplish them.
The second compelling reason is that setting aspiring goals make you neglect facts and real situations. People have a tendency to interpret events positively and overestimate actual circumstances. Whit this in mind, eager to gain ambitious goals escalate this inclination and cause unreasonable behavior. It is a common fetal mistake done by everybody in all ages. Take, for instance, my brother who love a particular car got various high-interest loans to buy that luxury car whit the hope of he could increase his earning and pay loans back. Not only couldn’t he afford to pay but also he was forced to sell some his precious gifts to get rid of these horrible loans.
In summary all aforementioned reasons bring us to conclude that reasonable goals help to have a better understanding of our lives as we can follow them without any pressure and overwhelming stress and realize our circumstances and limitations.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, while, as for, for example, for instance, i think, in contrast, in summary, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1902.0 1977.66487455 96% => OK
No of words: 379.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01846965699 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93952714252 2.67179642975 110% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606860158311 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.7199067205 48.9658058833 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.105263158 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9473684211 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153980066757 0.236089414692 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0437496983227 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487632576397 0.0737576698707 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0813459410593 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462095696234 0.0645574589148 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 11.7677419355 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 86.8835125448 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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