If you were the leader of the country, what kind of policy would you use to succeed?
1. Creating job for unemployed people
2. Develop agriculture and reduce food prices
3. Develop Housing
Since the dawn of civilization and industrialization the ever-increasing role policies of leadership that are taken place has been undeniable. Beyond any doubt, gaining higher life qualities is just one of the desireable results of taking appropriate policies in leading a socity. numerous contributing factors that can lead a socity to succed have been assessd for decadeds. The unavoidable question that always has been the topic of controversy and brought about debates is whethere it is better to invest on creating more job opportunities or or develop other basic needs conditions such as housing or agriculture and food prices.
I personally believe that availability of job opportunities is a key factor in every society in order to succed. In what follows, two conspicuous reasons will vindicate my standpoint.
First remarkable aspect to point out is that creating job opportunities needs a wide variety of interfrastructures which all can result in a sustainable society. No one can cast doubt on the inavitability of different kinds of proplems that every country has to deal with. Therefore, the more impenetrable to any kind of issues a country is the more successful it can be considered. Obviosly a country that has a supporting structure to provide all the members of the society with all types of vocations is finantially sustainable due to the balance in different parts of ecconomy in which every part is able to sonsolidate the other part’s apsence or shortage in case of need. Consiquently such a firm socity can withstant lots of barriers and is finally succcessful. Recent studies conducted in my country indicate that more financially sustainable socities are the ones with higher ratio of job opportunities. All in all, interdipendency of the job creation and insidpensible interfrastructures can make job creation a beneficial opportunity to fortify the society implicitly.
Furthermore, one should take into account the fact that availability of more vocations in a country let people have their dream jobs , so, the average rate of happiness and life satisfaction is considerably higher in that socity. Basiclly, one’s happiness and feelings of life has a great part in deffinition of succes. For the matter of illustration, there was a time when I was literaly deppressed duo to a problem associated with a educational position that I had not been able to achieve and I felt neither happiness nor life satisfaction in that period of time. Eventually I came to the point that I thaught I was not successful and I was not going to be. Had I achieved that posision, my life would have been replete with happiness and therefore, I would have definitly felt that I was successful.
In conclusion, I believe that creating more jobs for the unemployed is by far the most eefective way to lead a society to success. So it is highly recommended that all leader especially leaders of the countries pay more attention to invest on high potential action such as job creation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2522.0 1977.66487455 128% => OK
No of words: 491.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13645621181 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29279521539 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 212.727598566 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507128309572 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 821.7 618.680645161 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0900973972 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.1 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.55 20.6045352989 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 5.45110844103 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125950618288 0.236089414692 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369105212349 0.076458572812 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.037660901569 0.0737576698707 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0752069949927 0.150856017488 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041284425634 0.0645574589148 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 11.7677419355 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 58.1214874552 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.01818996416 113% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 86.8835125448 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 10.002688172 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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