Imagine that company can spend monye for new equipment or repair. Which decision will be better?

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Imagine that company can spend monye for new equipment or repair. Which decision will be better?

It is common knowledge that employees should have a brand new equipment for their work which definitely facilitates their job and makes it pleasant. However, I strongly convinced that having fresh repairs is more vital for workers for some reasons. Also, if company have some sum of money, will recommend them to spend company`s money for renovation work space.
Firstly, if company make some sort of repair, it will definitely increase a productivity among workers. From my point of view, refreshed work space will be more pleasant than the bleak and gloomy one. According to the scientific research, people are more productive in the bright and room, because radiant colors have an influence on people`s mood. Consequently, the mood link with our productivity. So, it will be a wise decision to spend money for repairs.
Secondly, brand new work space will attract new employees. It goes without say that all people choose their job for some measures and one of those canons is work place. As for me, I would rather choose to have a job in place there will be a new renovation, because it will enjoyable for me to work there. Moreover, if company with high wage offers me a job, but there will be inappropriate conditions, I will definitely deny their request. That is why new repairs will satisfy new workers, so it will be more profitable for company.
Finally, renovation will make employees more satisfied. It goes without say that all people should be rally keen on their job, because this fact has a great influence on worker`s mental health. Unfortunately, more than seventy percent of employees really hate job that they do. Furthermore, due to this regretful fact, more than half of those employees have some kind of mental disorders, such as neurosis. However, workers are able to avoid it, if they will enjoy their work. Although, if company takes care about its workers, it will make some refreshments.
By the way of conclusion, based on arguments explored above, it will be beneficial for both company and employees to have new repairs instead of new equipment.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, as for, kind of, sort of, such as, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 9.8082437276 184% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1748.0 1977.66487455 88% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98005698006 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76845099406 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527065527066 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 9.0 3.51792114695 256% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1078803211 48.9658058833 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4 100.406767564 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.55 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05 5.45110844103 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.319963122821 0.236089414692 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111121263953 0.076458572812 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934010798177 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.20892828425 0.150856017488 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765445988858 0.0645574589148 119% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 11.7677419355 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 10.9000537634 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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