The increase in automation will lead to people loosing their jobs.
The statement states that the increase in the automation people will loose their job. Yes, I agree with this statement given above. There are several factors for it, which I will explain in the following parts of the essay.
To begin with it can be truly said that increasing the automation will replace the workers in the factories which further increase the danger of unemployment if those workers don't get a new job. For example in automobile manufacturing factory in which automobile parts assembled by robots replacing the workers then those workers will be unemployed as they don't have any alternate skill to earn money for their livelihood. Hence the replacement of workers with automation will increase the unemployment rate.
Additionally, it can be said that there is no guarantee that if automation is increased then new sector jobs will be opened for workers or only limited numbers of workers get replaced by automation instead of all workers. For example if a businessman gets more profit by replacing workers with machines for manufacturing then there would be no reason for him/her to employ those workers in a new sector or teach them new skill which can be used in other sector as there is no law which prevents their exploitation in this way. So, due to automation people will loose jobs.
Finally, it can said that increasing automation in job sector will reduce job opportunity for the people as there is no such assistance from government to help the people to explore new fields of jobs. Lack of skill center and low unemployment monetary fund further makes it difficult for people to find new jobs. Unless government assist in this matter, it can be truly said that increment of automation will definitely lead to people loose there jobs.
Therefore, increasing in the automation people will their jobs. Due to reasons which are explained above, justifies the statement that automation increment will lead to people jobs decrement, if any serious action is not taken in this matter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... increase in the automation people will loose their job. Yes, I agree with this state...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...danger of unemployment if those workers dont get a new job. For example in automobil...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...hose workers will be unemployed as they dont have any alternate skill to earn money ...
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Line 3, column 424, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ill to earn money for their livelihood. Hence the replacement of workers with automat...
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[4]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
... way. So, due to automation people will loose jobs. Finally, it can said that incr...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'say'
Suggestion: say
...ple will loose jobs. Finally, it can said that increasing automation in job secto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, so, then, therefore, for example, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 24.0 8.0752688172 297% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00892857143 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71158066701 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.434523809524 0.524837075471 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 618.680645161 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.6806590307 48.9658058833 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.214285714 100.406767564 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.442657379683 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.232371816626 0.076458572812 304% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192555510946 0.0737576698707 261% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.322184332206 0.150856017488 214% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105802390905 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 11.7677419355 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 58.1214874552 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.1575268817 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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