Independent writing (question 2)Some people prefer to get up early in the morning and start the day’s work. Others prefer to get up later in the day and work until late at night. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your cho

Work is worship. We need to do everyday. But different people have different habits and specific time. Some people prefer to do work in the morning, some people in afternoon or some of them are night person. I personally believe that wake up and work in the morning are very beneficial for the people for three reasons which is maintained below.

First of all, Waking up early is very healthy to our body. Many researches said that in the morning the concentration of the human is in the maximum. When you people get up in the morning, people saw the sunrise, so it is good for health because you feel good. Early wake up also help in sleep on time and take proper rest. For this reason early person do their work good and productive way,and they stay healthy.

In addition to this,wake up in the morning and doing the job in the morning helps in complete the work early. So, you can utilize the rest of the day in doing other activities. For instance, my mother wake up in the morning on 5 O'Clock and go for the jogging, after come back for the jogging, she does cooking and go for the office. she is also doing extra activities like sewing and knitting.

Finally, early wakeup is help out in study. Many students prefer to do study and job simultaneously. For example, My sister is a civil engineer and she is also preparing for the other examinations like Civil Services. So she Study in the morning, because that time environment is quite so that she concentrates well on the study and memorize things fast. And she also does her job very sincerely and carefully. That’s the reason, she is a very good student and employee.

From the above reasons and examples, I strongly believe that wake up early and working the morning makes people very effective, productive and healthy. It also makes people sincere and successful.

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Average: 6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 32, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
Work is worship. We need to do everyday. But different people have different ha...
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Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the morning, people saw the sunrise, so it is good for health because you feel g...
^^
Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...on do their work good and productive way,and they stay healthy. In addition to t...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , wake
...ey stay healthy. In addition to this,wake up in the morning and doing the job in ...
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Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: She
...she does cooking and go for the office. she is also doing extra activities like sew...
^^^
Line 7, column 226, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'studies'.
Suggestion: Studies
...xaminations like Civil Services. So she Study in the morning, because that time envir...
^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...akes people sincere and successful.
^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1977.66487455 77% => OK
No of words: 327.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65443425076 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49480564658 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.477064220183 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3364382208 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.1818181818 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8636363636 20.6045352989 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22727272727 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282341770882 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839290088266 0.076458572812 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663582249429 0.0737576698707 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167388951014 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072629775708 0.0645574589148 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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