Internet provides a lot of information
internet plays an important role in people's life and information acquisition and information interchange is getting crucial and conventional nowadays. Personaly I believe that internet can be a good source of information in any field. I feel this way for two major reasons which I explore them in the following essay.
First of all, accessing to a lot of information can hold people up to date. with being updated, people from previous genarartion do not assume that they are apart from the society. My grand father is a compeling example of this. He was so depressed because he thought that he is unfunctional and can not do anything in the modern todays world even his usuall task. Recently he started using youtube as a result of my recommendation to get his desirable information and now he feel betther.
Secondly, one day these information will be usefull. Getting a lot of information may seem to be unnecessery at the time of doing that, but all the precious awarness will assist us come to assist us in the requirement time. For instance two weeks ago we encounterd a scene in my work place. One of our colleaques fall down so that he was unmoved and could not breath, but he was so lucky since I was there. A while ago, I received a Telegram massage consist of primary cares that any body should learn. At first I persumed it is just waste time to read this massage. Any way I studied this and now almost one and a half year I used them to save someone's life. I think this example clearly illustrate why I have this thought.
To sum it up, I strongly have this opinion that internet is full of valuable information. That is because, stay updated is not possible without internet and getting more information through internet is usefull since they can be used one day
Grammar and spelling errors:
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internet plays an important role in peoples life...
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...information can hold people up to date. with being updated, people from previous gen...
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Suggestion: feels
...et his desirable information and now he feel betther. Secondly, one day thes...
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...le information and now he feel betther. Secondly, one day these information will...
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Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...feel betther. Secondly, one day these information will be usefull. Getting a lot of infor...
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Message: Did you mean 'can not breathe'?
Suggestion: can not breathe
...es fall down so that he was unmoved and could not breath, but he was so lucky since I was there....
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...m massage consist of primary cares that any body should learn. At first I persumed it is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for instance, i feel, i think, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1475.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65299684543 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73216352572 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574132492114 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.131850415 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9444444444 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.55555555556 5.45110844103 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212902013126 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658145735423 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835849046974 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15210530919 0.150856017488 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723907867018 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 11.7677419355 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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