Is it a beneficial for those people who stop reading and listening the news for few days and weeks?
No doubt, it is admitted that news is the mainstay to be informed of the whole world. But today a lot of people are very much accustomed to reading and listening news in such a way that most of the time they can’t help resisting them to quench their thirst of knowledge of new happenings. However, it is true that such an inclination to news carries away a lot phobia in their life as there are pros and cons in every elements of this world. Conversely, those who are not aware of newspaper they basically enjoy the world without tension with their own accord, which is why I wholeheartedly do believe that keeping thyself aloof from reading and listening for couple of weeks is beneficial to them in case of habituated reader.
To embark on, albeit news is deemed as the tool to be informed of the whole scenario of the world, most of the cases, news circulates exaggerated information a lot. From this perspective, no doubt it is a curse. That’s why, it is high time for those people they remained standstill at their room without reading newspaper. For instance, my grandparents are very enthusiastic at reading newspaper and everyday he uses his 5 hours absorbed in news. Nowadays he is very upset due to the news of mosque attack in New Zealand. What I mean by this is that newspaper at now disseminates the situation in such way that all Muslims are terrorist and they again are functioning to bombard to and fro which the reason is for people to awe. However, the influence of it grabs my grandfather drastically and he is in the traumatic condition. So, it is far better to desist for him to read newspaper.
In addition, newspaper inhibits thinking power enormously. In real, there are many newspapers that are rife and engross our mentality in a way that we can’t explain the situation. Actually, it confines our brain capacity and not to allow us to decipher the real gist of our thoughtfulness. From my personal experience, I used to read the New York Times where I saw different new topic which was disclosed in a way that all gist of this invention has been unearthed. Last month I was trying with my might and main to figure out the enigma of the seed of mango tree. But it is a matter of shock that in newspaper an article was written very pompously, that’s why I lost my intention to continue this thesis. Moreover, newspaper more often than not upholds the scenario that invention behind a prospective space has already accomplished, which greatly blocks the mind of inquisitive persons.
Last but not least, keeping own self aloof from reading and listening newspaper has copious advantages especially health related. For example, most of the news in today’s world is based on aggression and outrage to the harried people of Philistine or Kashmir. Moreover those news are made very alluring to others so that people feel very helpless and their mind is captivated by dreadful scene. In result heart attack, amnesia, weaknesses are very common of the old people. Rather it will be beneficial not to keep touch in this situation.
To wrap it up, it is cumbersome to provide the solution of this open-ended question. So although a few may oppose my purview, it is clear that in order to be keep us devoid of thoughtfulness we have to tread our legs in those situation where our hopes will not be nipped in the bud. More or less only through keeping a relation with this world can’t we make us free from distress? Whatever we perform we have to look on the glass of the world but our fruition is a prime one.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 225, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to resist' or 'resist'.
Suggestion: to resist; resist
...t most of the time they can't help resisting them to quench their thirst of knowledg...
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Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to figure out the enigma of the seed of mango tree. But it is a matter of shock ...
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Line 4, column 265, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...arried people of Philistine or Kashmir. Moreover those news are made very alluring to ot...
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Line 4, column 274, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this news' or 'those newses'?
Suggestion: this news; those newses
...ople of Philistine or Kashmir. Moreover those news are made very alluring to others so tha...
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Line 4, column 479, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Rather,
...sses are very common of the old people. Rather it will be beneficial not to keep touch...
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Line 4, column 545, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al not to keep touch in this situation. To wrap it up, it is cumbersome to provi...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[6]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'little may'.
Suggestion: little may
...this open-ended question. So although a few may oppose my purview, it is clear that in ...
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Line 5, column 221, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this situation' or 'those situations'?
Suggestion: this situation; those situations
...ghtfulness we have to tread our legs in those situation where our hopes will not be nipped in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, conversely, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, still, thus, for example, for instance, i mean, in addition, no doubt, it is true, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 38.0 15.1003584229 252% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 79.0 43.0788530466 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 93.0 52.1666666667 178% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2934.0 1977.66487455 148% => OK
No of words: 628.0 407.700716846 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67197452229 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.00598923014 4.48103885553 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74567547661 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 307.0 212.727598566 144% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488853503185 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 909.9 618.680645161 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4039478422 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.785714286 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.6045352989 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.85842293907 311% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238873621225 0.236089414692 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0568810112307 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681763343854 0.0737576698707 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138381252119 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.098346399418 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 10.9000537634 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 86.8835125448 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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