It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree?
Despite bearing some similarities, the differences between living in large cities and living in the countryside are remarkable. Some people are the leading proponents of the belief that it is better for children to grown up in the rural areas. However, I strongly assert that although living in big cities has some demerits, its advantages noticeably outweigh its disadvantages. In the following paragraphs, I will aptly substantiate my viewpoint.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that living in the cities has some drawbacks. Air pollution is a conspicuous problem in big cities which may affect children’s health negatively. Air pollution is associated with cardio-vascular, respiratory, and visual problems such as asthma and eye irritation. Furthermore, living in big cities brings about anxiety and tension to children. Spending countless hours in congested traffic, or traveling from one side of the city to the other side is not beneficial for children, neither is it pleasurable. The aforementioned problems are common to city-life. On the other hand, there is a number of remarkable benefits in city-life.
For one, there is a plethora of prestigious and potent educational facilities in big cities. These powerful institutions employ lots of experienced and talented teachers and professors. Studying in these institutions paves the way for having a bright future. Children can learn innumerable and valuable things from the teachers, as well as broaden their horizons. They can become prepared for the competitive life in their not-so-distant future. Only by attending these renowned educational institutions in the cities, can children overcome the obstacles of today’s hectic and harsh life. While there is a great number of facilities in every big city, there are few of them in rural areas, therefore, living in a big city is of utmost priority for children.
Moreover, not to mention the importance of healthcare facilities would be an oversight. Big cities host the best healthcare facilities all around the world. It is crucial for children who are growing up, to be visited by an expert and skilled doctor. That most of the renowned doctors with remarkable prowess work in healthcare facilities in the cities is a known fact. Healthcare facilities in the cities utilize plenty of up to date equipment which are necessary for maintaining public health. On the other hand, rural areas suffer from a shortage of healthcare facilities. Consequently, people who live in the rural areas are obliged to commute to the cities in order to seek medical help. Thus, it is more convenient to live in a city with adequate healthcare facilities, rather than commuting to one every time a medical situation emerges.
All in all, living in big cities may have some disadvantages. However, there are some aspects to city-life which makes it a desirable choice for parents who are willing to bring up their children under the most favorable conditions. Thus, it is better for children to grow up in big cities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... for children to grow up in big cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 43.0788530466 53% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2563.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27366255144 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08780558736 2.67179642975 116% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 212.727598566 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495884773663 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 813.6 618.680645161 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4144514365 48.9658058833 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3793103448 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7586206897 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.62068965517 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220512212017 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658495580225 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890092895214 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139388381231 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.057432901412 0.0645574589148 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 11.7677419355 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 58.1214874552 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 133.0 86.8835125448 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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