The question is whether it is better to grow up children in the countryside or large city. People with regard to their viewpoint may maintain different direction toward this statement. Many may think that raising children in a peaceful and relatively safe environment is far better than raising them in a place full of noise and distractions. While others may have the conviction that growing up children in large cities where they have access to a wide range of facilities would be more beneficial for both children and parents. I am personally unanimous with latter group for two reasons I will vastly explore in the following essay.
First of all, children who grow up in large cities are exposed to a wide range of cultural and academic events. Attending such events would give them many opportunities to find out their area of interests to a greater degree which directly influence their future carrier. For instance, when I was a little girl, my parents always could easily take me to theater performances almost every weekend and that time I really enjoyed playing and the way performers acted always attracted me. As a result of that I enroll in theater class in a cultural center in our community, I practiced with a great passion as far as by now I have been playing in more than 80 plays which would not be possible if I had never attended such cultural events. So being exposed to such events at an early age will certainly help children to find their own ways in life appropriately.
Secondly, large cities due to a vast number of facilities they provide for the dwellers, lay a perfect foundation for everyone of any age to have social interaction with a variety of people who are from different cultural background. Communications of this type will cause children to expand their horizon, obtain knowledge through different viewpoints and experiences they face. For instance my young cousin who is growing up in Tehran a populated city in my country which attract people from all around the world. Being in such environment help my young cousin to be comfortable interacting with people who speaks various languages and have religious beliefs different from her own. So much as she could got into company looking for candidate with international perspective.
To make long story short, raising children in urban environment offer many advantages including understanding their area of interest which directly influence their future carrier and widening their horizon which give them more opportunity when they are looking for job and wisdom as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun may seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much may', 'a good deal of may'.
Suggestion: Much may; A good deal of may
...ferent direction toward this statement. Many may think that raising children in a peacef...
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Line 5, column 707, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'get'
Suggestion: get
...rent from her own. So much as she could got into company looking for candidate with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, as a result, first of all, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 429.0 407.700716846 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00233100233 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55107846309 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7552053133 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543123543124 0.524837075471 103% => OK
syllable_count: 666.0 618.680645161 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.69568633 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.125 100.406767564 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8125 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149545323268 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613128420842 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718160432727 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0970838845047 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770695609505 0.0645574589148 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 11.7677419355 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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