We all require money to survive in this world to buy and use needy things in our life. Because money is an only thing from which we can purchase various life essential things. In short, money is the power. Although some people believe that it is better to enjoy our money while we earn it, others believe that it is best to save some amount of money for the future purpose. As far as I am concerned, I can concur with the latter one statement, since I believe that money is power. I have explained my view in the following lines.
Firstly, money is very important factor in our lives. Moreover, according to classical thinkers it acts as an incentive for people. We see that many students have lack of money for their further education completion. It may be a possibility that dearth of money or finance inflict due to restraint use of money in the past by their parents. In such case, the parents of that particular student think that they should have saved some amount of money for the future.
Moreover, not only in education but also in different fields, money sometimes play a vital role to save and defend the life of a person. For example, we see, watch many parents crying for their baby’s life as it requires a certain amount of money for operation, surgery or transplant of organ. More importantly, they regret for discarding and not saving money for the future use. Hence, in catastropic and unexpected condition, money has great role. In fact, it act as life saver and game changer.
Furthermore, we always use restraint sum of finance whatever we earning in our present life. It may be a case in our life in the future that due to use of money in uncontrolled and unrestrained manner, nobody will come forward to help us. Ultimately, we would beg to someone for one-time bread. For example, we see many begger who used to sleep on footpaths or railway stations or other public place. According to survey, the main reason for their plight is very related to lack of saving of money for the future. Because of lack of decision making skills, today they suffer through tough exam in their life.
In sum, as money is the power and time, it is very essential in our life. We should appreciate its price. Sometimes it plays a role of life saver or sometime it act as turning point for a person. Therefore, I contend that it is better to save some amount of money for future rather than using it recklessly and carelessly. A good decision maker and rational thinker should save finance for time in the future. In the view of the above, we can conclude that money can complete education of a student, it can save life by relevant operation or it can prevent us from being begger in the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in fact, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 43.0788530466 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 488.0 407.700716846 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56557377049 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70007681154 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45845622035 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.467213114754 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 727.2 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.94265232975 202% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.0727180513 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5714285714 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4285714286 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 5.45110844103 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303961649374 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894491035919 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0921348691805 0.0737576698707 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194974879474 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485827353228 0.0645574589148 75% => OK
automated_readability_index: 8.8 11.7677419355 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 86.8835125448 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.