Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for sometimes in the future?
It is an undeniable fact, that money plays a serious role in our life. Somebody likes to spend earnings at the moment he/she get money, others prefer to accommodate it. In my opinion, it is better to save earnings for greater purchases, rather than spend it instantaneously. I will give some examples to bolster my opinion.
Firstly, saving money can give us an opportunity to spend it on more important things. For example, expending salary at that day when you get it will deprive you of a chance to have a good car. In contrary, if flat or a house does not seem an impossible target.
Secondly, spending your savings on momentaneous things will deplete your wallet. A man, who has taught himself not to waste money of anything he wants, can reach success. it can lift your moral, adamantine your spirit.
Thirdly, saving earnings is a very efficient. Putting away a small part of bills will teach you an important lesson and can create a quality of sagaicous man. Your decisions will be more strong and you can take every aspect of something, because you will be able to predict things.
What conclusion can be drawn from this? I think, that accumulating money is a very sagacious decision, that could lead a person to a more reach and successive life. Everyone should think about savings a bill before spending it.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 15.1003584229 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 13.8261648746 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 52.1666666667 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1094.0 1977.66487455 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 231.0 407.700716846 57% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73593073593 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 4.48103885553 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64098359053 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 212.727598566 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623376623377 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.4094389536 48.9658058833 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 68.375 100.406767564 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4375 20.6045352989 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 5.45110844103 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304799572385 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880780606776 0.076458572812 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634454638435 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154549850834 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600506420675 0.0645574589148 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 11.7677419355 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 58.1214874552 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 86.8835125448 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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