it is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to have specialize in one specific subject
Without a shadow of doubt, people are the corner stone of a successful society; indeed, the more qualified individuals there are within a country, the more powerful a country is. In this regard, knowledge plays a vital role in preparing mankind for the future. With this in mind, some believe that it stands to reason that people should acquire a great variety of knowledge, while others think that it is better for human beings to be centralize in one subject. I, personally, subscribe to the latter attitude for several reasons, three of the most substantial of which are discussed below.
The most compelling reason is that as we all know, different individuals enjoy different interests. For example, a person may be inclined to politic, while another person would like art history. Therefore, when one learns many information has to with different subjects, he or she cannot find what it is their interest in the future; consequently they will rarely enjoy their work, which leads to dissatisfaction and decrease their self-confidence.
Another interpretation as to why I do not concur with the first perspective in the introductory paragraph lies in the fact that it is statistically proven that mind do not have the ability to handle multiple subjects in the same time in an excellent fashion; or, to put it in another way, in this situation, mind cannot appropriately focus; hence, if one knows two or three fields simultaneously, he or she will achieve shallow knowledge about the fields. As a point in view, consider an individual who is supposed to know about music, history, and chemistry at the same time. He or she will be neither a good musician, nor a proper historian or chemist in that they do not have enough time to pay attention to all the points.
The last but not the least reason is that acquiring knowledge about different issues at the same time may generates not only confusion, but also superficial learning since a person studying many things at same time is not be able to learn and gather enough information regarding each subjects. We should consider great scientist such as Edison, Einstein, and Madam Curie who have made striking changes in our world and have caused the world grows faster and faster. They localized their intellect on one subject and did their best, thus hugging success.
In summary, having considered all the aforementioned ingredients discussed above, I firmly endorse my point of view that the merits of centralization in one subject outweigh those of enjoying broad knowledge on the grounds that it gives people a chance not only to follow their interest, which triggers happiness and peace at mind, but also to have a better understanding about a subjects rather than a shallow one. Moreover, it paves the way for reaching the high level of profession in one individual theme major.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...art history. Therefore, when one learns many information has to with different subje...
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Line 2, column 222, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...art history. Therefore, when one learns many information has to with different subjects, he or s...
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Line 3, column 235, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an excellent fashion" with adverb for "excellent"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ndle multiple subjects in the same time in an excellent fashion; or, to put it in another way, in this ...
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Line 4, column 223, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...tudying many things at same time is not be able to learn and gather enough informa...
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Line 5, column 379, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a subject' or simply 'subjects'?
Suggestion: a subject; subjects
...so to have a better understanding about a subjects rather than a shallow one. Moreover, it...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'consequently', 'first', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'moreover', 'regarding', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'in summary', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.203389830508 0.229887763892 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.152542372881 0.158761421928 96% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0866290018832 0.0866891130778 100% => OK
Adverbs: 0.060263653484 0.046263068375 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0546139359699 0.0685040099705 80% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124293785311 0.118717715034 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0357815442561 0.0351676179071 102% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.83793179463 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0282485875706 0.0309702414327 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00188951952338 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0998116760829 0.0887237588012 112% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0188323917137 0.0209618222197 90% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.015065913371 0.0139019557991 108% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2842.0 2387.08602151 119% => OK
No of words: 477.0 408.028673835 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95807127883 5.86048508987 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67336384929 4.48200974243 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.358490566038 0.338922669872 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.255765199161 0.251872472559 102% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1928721174 0.174417080927 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.132075471698 0.112833075102 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83793179463 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545073375262 0.524397521467 104% => OK
Word variations: 65.7185812276 59.2087087015 111% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6684587814 73% => OK
Sentence length: 31.8 20.5533526081 155% => OK
Sentence length SD: 113.818842416 48.84282405 233% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.466666667 120.699889404 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.8 20.5533526081 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.13333333333 0.644075263715 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.5376344086 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.54480286738 90% => OK
Readability: 57.3765199161 45.7405998639 125% => OK
Elegance: 1.35915492958 1.45489161554 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337314928311 0.300154397459 112% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10266583256 0.103427244359 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0665440644744 0.0752933317313 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.567295681404 0.497263757937 114% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.167251053751 0.151897553556 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128797362795 0.114077575197 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835714178865 0.0781384742642 107% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.268582629313 0.336927656856 80% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0361389585535 0.067059652881 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219472324009 0.210909579961 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579538952028 0.0618886996521 94% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8870967742 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.86379928315 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.91756272401 20% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 9.0 8.42114695341 107% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.4623655914 122% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 2.75985663082 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 12.0 13.6433691756 88% => OK
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Rates: 86.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.0 Out of 30
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