It is better to marry with someone who is similar to you, rather than someone who is different from you.
Marriage is the most important decision of people's life. Every time people do not have chance to marry with someone. People must have to think about their partner. Both partners have responsibility to care each other and support each and every moment of life. It is not relationship about sexual feelings. In my opinion, it is better to marry with someone who is similar to your thoughts and life.
Firstly, it is not the decision about only one person but both must have to agree with each and every decision of life. For instance, my mother and father both are agree with every decision of their life. They both have similar thoughts. So, both are happy and living their life very well. On the other hand, my uncle and aunt both are different in some kind of thinking. So, it will create problem and they do not live their life very well.
Secondly, it is an advantage for both characters who is similar each other. If both characters have similar kind of interest then they can enjoy their life very well and fulfill all the dreams of their life. For instance, i and my wife both are interested in some activities like, visiting new place, taking picture, meet new people, eating traditional food. On the other hand, my friend Aman is also interested in this activities but he cannot enjoy because his partner Esha have no interest.
All in all, it is evidence that if people want to enjoy their life then they want to marry with someone who is similar to their thoughts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...instance, my mother and father both are agree with every decision of their life. They...
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Line 3, column 415, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...d, my friend Aman is also interested in this activities but he cannot enjoy because ...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ause his partner Esha have no interest. All in all, it is evidence that if peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for instance, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 43.0788530466 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 52.1666666667 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1216.0 1977.66487455 61% => OK
No of words: 264.0 407.700716846 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60606060606 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.48103885553 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26341526647 2.67179642975 85% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.465909090909 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 618.680645161 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7344105434 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.5294117647 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 5.45110844103 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134757939777 0.236089414692 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565325719313 0.076458572812 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0966615858164 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111902964387 0.150856017488 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0687259988139 0.0645574589148 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 11.7677419355 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 10.9000537634 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.47 8.01818996416 81% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 86.8835125448 40% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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