Compare and contrast your way of life with that of your parents. Which way of life do you think would be more satisfying to future generations?
I learn every lesion of my life from my parents. My parent is always inspiration for me. They taught me how to face difficult situations and find out solution. I am always compares my life experience and situations with my parent’s way of life.
Here, It is advantages to compare your life with your parent's way of life because they are the only one who gives you right direction and correct suggestions. For instance, when i was studied at P. P. Savani School in India. I had subject of history class which was boring and dangerous. My teacher also explained that how to improve my scores but I don't know how to get good scores in this subject. My parents taught me fundamental principal and his experience share with me. So, i can relate my situation with their experience. Doubtlessly, I get good score in this boring subject and then it was become interesting subject. Thus, Your parents is only one who can teach you very well and gives perfect direction based on experience, other people cannot share their experience. All in all, in some situations contrast your way of life with that of your parents. For instance, when i was in 12th standard at Kaushal School of science at India. My parents taught me old methods in mathematics which is very complex. At that time i used to short and sweet methods and this would give me better result rather than complex methods. Finally, i would like to say that it may also happens that every time you did not learn from your way of life with that of your parent’s life. Thus, I think that every events of parent’s life does not satisfying to future generations. We have to compare and contrast our way of life with that of our parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, so, then, thus, well, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 43.0788530466 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1977.66487455 71% => OK
No of words: 303.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60726072607 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6154402339 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 212.727598566 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488448844884 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 618.680645161 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7547275871 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.8 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 20.6045352989 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.53405017921 44% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351029456661 0.236089414692 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107167390012 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136426969151 0.0737576698707 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258760297004 0.150856017488 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105969801575 0.0645574589148 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 11.7677419355 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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