It is commonly believed that in life, success is not the most important thing; it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when we fail. Do you agree with that idea? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I agree with the idea that, beyond success, remaining happy and optimistic after success is yet important. For the reasons that believing that success is the most significant thing in life could bind your eyes in seeking for happiness, which is seemly the ultimate answer to the question that what people are living for. Meanwhile, remaining happy after failure can provide you with numerous of unexpected positive effects.
First, for people that concentrate solely on success, they'll find themselves losing everything along the way. In contrast, people spending efforts on maintaining happiness will generally tend to get a better ending. Most people with agree with the statement that success is quite an appealing target, while failure is not that acceptable. So most people will follow the trends to seek for success, while avoiding failure anyway. However, it is likely that people will forget about what they are originally pursuing, e.g., happiness, health, and meaning in life, since having success, or winning in competitions is addictive. Remember, what really matters is not the consequence, is the thing that motivates you from the very beginning. Pushing yourself like slopping down the hill, you will finally lose everything.
Second, hopefully, there is another kind of people, who kept what is really important in their mind. I'm not saying that they just dislike success, absolutely not. They might value success, as well as happiness, and failure, which can be unexpected. For this class of person, failure is more acceptable. They know that they've acquired happiness and other features like knowledge along the way of pursuing success, just like the former kind of person. I believe what can really impress the one, and the one can really remember after tens of years is the procedure, not the title you can get along with “success”. This way of developing ideas, which is much more difficult than being happy after success, is the thing that can really support me towards adversity.
Those are not only my personal answer to the question, but also wisdom of surviving, which can be applied everywhere to tackle hardship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, e.g., finally, first, however, if, really, second, so, well, while, in contrast, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 347.0 407.700716846 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20749279539 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5776837447 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564841498559 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5785735419 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.388888889 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2777777778 20.6045352989 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243866785945 0.236089414692 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736421687029 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592621157065 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142850778553 0.150856017488 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977390504085 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 11.7677419355 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 86.8835125448 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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