It is commonly believed that in life, success is not the most important thing; it is more important to remain happy and optimistic when we fail.
The development of society empowers us with various opportunities to succeed. While a number of people insist that success is the most significant goal, I agree that remaining happy and optimistic when we fail is more important.
To begin with, pursuing success can be extremely stressful. Nowadays, considerable students, for example, have already been occupied with heavy academic burdens, like doing experiments, preparing presentations, and writing theses. Especially when we are chasing our dreams, we have to spend abundant time solving difficulties, developing grand pictures, and practicing. There is no wonder that a number of people have little time to relax and are overwhelmed with fatigue, some are even suffering from stress-related diseases, such as insomnia and depression. Nevertheless, despite working hard day and night, a group of people may still fail to fulfill their dreams. Instead of just giving up one’s dream, it is of vital importance to remain optimistic afterward, in order to recharge oneself to better prepare for the next battle. One of my personal experiences can serve as an example to illustrate that. When I was fighting for the national scholarship, I learned every course to the best, devoted myself to volunteer services and students affairs. However, I was still outperformed by others. Instead of just giving up, I work even harder and finally succeeded the next year.
Besides, treating failure with peacefulness will enable us to better learn from the failure. If one treats failure as a complete disaster, one is more likely to force oneself to forget the entire experience and stop fighting right away. On the contrary, an optimist will consider failure as a typical barrier one have to cross during the way to final success, and one will learn every lesson from this precious adventure and try to avoid failure next time.
Moreover, failure sometimes is another kind of success. That is to say, when I encounter something that does not suit my expectation, I tend to consider it a failure at the very beginning. Yet, when I look more carefully and in-depth into it, I may find I accidentally find a solution or answer to another question. If I just give up and ignore the whole thing, I will definitely never discover that and that would be a true failure.
In conclusion, treating failure with happiness and optimism will encourage people to fight harder and they will more likely to succeed in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r and finally succeeded the next year. Besides, treating failure with peacefuln...
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Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put after the verb 'is'.
Suggestion: is sometimes
... failure next time. Moreover, failure sometimes is another kind of success. That is to say...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, however, if, look, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the contrary, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 403.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12655086849 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8563456402 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588089330025 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 656.1 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1337999736 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.3 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.15 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.45110844103 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190858259202 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0505297105261 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791739812627 0.0737576698707 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11568529727 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870378816183 0.0645574589148 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 86.8835125448 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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