Some people like to keep a record of their own experiences by uploading pictures and other information to social-networking sites. Other people prefer not to create such records. Which approach do you prefer, and why?
The prosperity of the internet has raised a trend to upload pictures and other information on social media to keep a record of memories. However, I think creating such a record could lead to some backfire.
To begin with, it could be quite time-consuming to post pictures and notes online. Nowadays, students, for example, have already been occupied with heavy academic burdens, like writing thesis and doing experiments. Especially for those who want to go to work after graduation, they have to take part-time jobs to earn the experience for their future. Thus, their schedule is relatively tight. If they have to spend extra time picking pictures, it will take additional time, which may not be able to find a vacant slot in their fully arranged schedule.
Moreover, pressure may arise from sharing memories online. It is often the case that when people post their traveling photos on social media, they would check frequently how many likes and comments they get, and they tend to be nervous if they get mediocre attention from others. Under this pressure, there is no wonder that some persons will be absent-minded now and then, which may even lead to stress-related diseases, like insomnia and depression.
Additionally, danger lies in as well. Precious memories always come with exceptional private information, such as a home address, family member's name, and daily routine schedule. Even small pieces of information will be enough for malicious criminals to target you. One of my experiences serves as an example to illustrate that. When I first landed in Singapore, I was so excited that I could not wait to share this pleasure with others. Accidentally, I exposed my phone number and name on social media as well. The next day, a phishing call pretending an authority officer claimed that I violated the covid-19 self-quarantine orders and demanded my personal information. He stated my name and date of arrival so clearly that I was extremely close to believing him. Since then, I would consider and check thoroughly before I put anything online.
In conclusion, I prefer not to keep a record on social media.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 352.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06818181818 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.805178717 2.67179642975 105% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622159090909 0.524837075471 119% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.9029226666 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 5.45110844103 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213534084866 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583639806908 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816093329086 0.0737576698707 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158273449043 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117948878026 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 86.8835125448 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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