Is it good for a child to have a pet?
In my country people that say that pets are the best friends of humans. I personally think that it is good for a child to have a pet. The reasons I hold this stance will be elaborated in the paragraphs below.
To start with, having a pet accustoms the child to be responsible. Looking after a pet is an everyday job. The kid has to feed the animal everyday and make shure that the pet has a fresh water to drink. Moreover, having some animals, such a dog, requests to walk it regulary. Performing all of these tasks makes the child to be liable. If the kid is able to deal with the duties, he is likely to become a responsible member of the family, and take care of his loved ones in the future. Althoug a meriad of other activities can teach young people to become liable, such as accomplishing everyday shool homework, looking after a pet is the best one. To that end, having a pet by a kid makes tremendous contribution to the future carachter of the child.
Secondly, pets can prevent the young individual from loneliness. The child can play with the animal whenever he wants. Plus, pets are always waiting for the owner at home. It gives to people marvelous filling that they are not alone. If the child lives in the rural place, lack of neighbor kinds around to play with, he can do it with his pet and stay active and positive. Distite the opinion that it is better for the child to communicate with his pears, having a pet as a friend gives him a firend who loves him sencerely from the bottom of the heart. So, being around of the home creature can protect the child from negative emotions and give an oppotrunity to have a best friend for years.
To recapitulate, I feel that it is advantageous for the child to have a pet. This is because it teaches him to be a reliable person in the future and helps to avoid filling of loneliness. All thigs considered it is reasonable to assume that having a pet is a great thing for any kid!
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...motions and give an oppotrunity to have a best friend for years. To recapitulate...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing a pet is a great thing for any kid!
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, as to, i feel, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34615384615 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47278997386 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486263736264 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.994623655914 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2381530282 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 100.406767564 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.45110844103 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.4976479806 0.236089414692 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167582792975 0.076458572812 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.180320416455 0.0737576698707 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.335460056792 0.150856017488 222% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567715647916 0.0645574589148 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 11.7677419355 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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