is it good learn foreign language? (2)
Generally speaking, invention of the language is one of most important inventions of human beings that made their lives much easier. As a result, more than thousands of languages produced all around the world. Nowadays with advancement of technology and advent of smartphones and higher-end gadgets learning language is much easier than it was decades ago. Almost everyone has access to a computer device and the internet to learn new languages easily. Some may think it is good idea to learn a foreign language. Some may think opposite. They think learning a foreign and new language is not worth that. In my opinion learning new language is very important and useful for many reasons.
First and foremost, learning a second language is very important for our knowledge because we will gain access to treasury of many original and native sources. Doubtlessly, such access will provide many different and mostly new materials for us to learn and vast our information on almost any subjects. You will be able to read many books original version with higher chance of its material better. For instance, if you are an English poet, you will have better understanding of learning the Persian poems by learning the Persian language rather than reading and studying translated version of that. Besides that, being bilingual will increase your brain's performance and as a result, you will become more scholar.
Second, learning a foreign language will increase your opportunities around the world for living, working or studying in other countries. For instance, let's say you are learning the French as a second language, as a result you will gain chance to study or work in many French speaking countries such as France, Monaco or even Canada. In addition to that with learning a language you will have better understanding from culture that language is related to. For example, my dad learned Russian language when he was at high school, then he started learning most things about their culture, traditions, foods and their social life in advance. This experience led him toward studying at Russia for his master degree.
All in all, though some may oppose my opinion, it is clear that learning a second language will be useful for you because it will broaden your understanding and will increase your chance of living in a foreign country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 523, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'thinks'.
Suggestion: thinks
...a to learn a foreign language. Some may think opposite. They think learning a foreign...
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Line 2, column 198, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
.... Doubtlessly, such access will provide many different and mostly new materials for us to lear...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 387.0 407.700716846 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04909560724 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6082196342 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516795865633 0.524837075471 98% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0420669392 48.9658058833 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.842105263 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3684210526 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.21052631579 5.45110844103 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37615741137 0.236089414692 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139390675929 0.076458572812 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112011928344 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.248304937992 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121453102608 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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