Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Generally speaking, all people, doesn't matter what age or gender they have, regardless of their race or religion all of them are members of a specific society around the world. They all live together and although they may seem living and working independently, in fact, they are considered as a single entity within society. Young adults as one of the major groups in all societies are no exception from that. Some may think nowadays young people do not have an influence on vital decisions that are important for the whole society. Some may disagree. They think young people have an influence on crucial decisions within their society. I agree with the latter one for two reasons.
First, the younger generation of a society has a most important influence on the future of their society because they are roots and stems of a society's career in all jobs. Every country in the world directly depends on hard work of its younger generation and young labors. They work hard non-stop night and day in all fields. In the business, medicine, research, science and nearly all fields they are pioneer in their work space. For instance, without millions of younger people who work in factories in the country, the economy of that country will decline rapidly because no younger people means no more jobs and more labors and a as result, no production for the country, which are crucial for them. As you can see without the younger generation a country will collide with lots of challenges and problems to maintain its existence or control its future.
Second, younger people are among the most creative and innovative part of every society. It is evident that they have more energy, more knowledge and more ready brain to create new things which directly control every society's future. They do take lots of risks and less afraid of possible problems ahead of them, as a result, they convey the whole country forward, toward the better future. For example, if younger programmers and developers all around the world (especially the Silicon Valley), wouldn't exist there would be no operating systems and applications that our lives and tasks mostly depend on that. Nowadays most of our tasks and activities are dependent on all of these apps and smartphones. Even businessmen, politicians, scientists and almost whole society are in need of those apps. This phenomenon shows that how important the younger generation and adults are for our society's next generation.
All in all, though some may oppose my opinion, it is clear that younger people are directly playing a vital role in every society's future in nearly all fields for reasons I stated above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...portant for the whole society. Some may disagree. They think young people have an influe...
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...he world especially the Silicon Valley, wouldnt exist there would be no operating syste...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, second, so, for example, for instance, in fact, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2207.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 445.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9595505618 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47853657275 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485393258427 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 684.0 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7638341892 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.095238095 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1904761905 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185886035638 0.236089414692 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618472785061 0.076458572812 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614755040039 0.0737576698707 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118287622048 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471848887257 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 11.7677419355 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 10.9000537634 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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