it has been said that : not everything that is learned is contained in book . compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from book. In your opinion, which source is more important? why?
Learning has several meanings and there are lots of ways which we can gain knowledge and learn. Nowadays we have so many resources in order to obtain information. In my point of view, books and experiments are the most important sources. personally, I believe that books and treatises have vital role in our lives to become more knowledgeable. I would like to illustrate my reasons as follows.
First of all, books give us comperhensive information as a trustful friend in a short time. By reading book we can gain knowledge in various majors and subjects in very short time, in comparison with experience. You can just go to library and find appropriate books instead of waiting to experience a special occasion. My own experience is a compelling example of this. I remember about two years ago, there was an amazing chance for me to have an incredibly long vacation. I was delighted and stuned ands I decided to make so much effort so a s to find a romantic destination for my trip. Consequently, I searched in the internet and found a fantastic book which was contained comprehensive information about countries all over the world. This book included all beneficial points like weather, culture, special foods, historical places and etc. in addition, if I wanted to get this information by experience I would have to spend days or weeks and it was so time consuming.
Besides, we can be aware of every details and aspects of our subject by reading books. In my opinion, the best advantageous of book is that it gives the details for free or less expensive than gain experience. If people want to experience all the situations and places they should pay lots of money. To be more specific, get knowledge by experience it definitely lead to spend much money and even miss your chances. For instance, I used to invest in some project to make profit when I was younger. At first I thought that I should emphasize on my own assumptions and experiments in different occasions. As a result, it was not much helpful and I could not successful in this way. However, I decided to get a useful book which described hazardous and risky situation that any investor could face with in his career. By studying some books, my point of view has changed and I could make some fabulous investment. Actually, those books taught me lots of patterns that made my project defensible and I could predict the fluctuations in rates.
Despite these advantages, researches and experiments has proved that, the knowledge that is gained from experiments is very likely to be retain in our memory for a long period of time. For example, most of people believe that the experience they have gained remain with their own as long as they live. In fact, they prefer to manipulate knowledge and use experience rather than only possess knowledge.
In conclusion, I prefer to get information and obtain knowledge by reading and studying useful books, because, this attitude makes me to get knowledgeable faster, easier and less expensive.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, consequently, first, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 13.8261648746 181% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 43.0788530466 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 52.1666666667 132% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.0752688172 248% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2509.0 1977.66487455 127% => OK
No of words: 515.0 407.700716846 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87184466019 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.763781212 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86263909898 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 258.0 212.727598566 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.500970873786 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 784.8 618.680645161 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2001077448 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.6071428571 100.406767564 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3928571429 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 21.0 11.8709677419 177% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26859745016 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677369697139 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637592131745 0.0737576698707 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153499699049 0.150856017488 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0459228531605 0.0645574589148 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 86.8835125448 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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