you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because the world is changing so quickly, people are now less happy or less satisfied with their lives than people were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Do
The world is changing continuously, and it is not comparable to the past. Some people believe that because of the rapid transformations, people are less cheerful now. I firmly disagree, and in my opinion, these changes have made lives more convenient and more fun.
The main reason I believe people are happier today is that the shifts in every aspect of the world have resulted in more convenience for everyone. The new technologies and great infrastructures in cities such as the availability of electrical power and heat in every house is a magnificent development. For example, my father used to live in Robatkarim, a small city in Iran, in which there was no piping network for gas to houses 50 years ago and his dad and he had to collect wood before cold seasons and warm up their house by the stored wood during the whole winter. Such difficulties are unnecessary now because most cities fulfill these fundamental needs.
While the hectic lifestyle in cities caused by the revolutions in the business world, is stressful and exhausting, the availability of recreational facilities nowadays makes the changes in the world more interesting. There are great opportunities for anyone to enjoy holidays or spending a night out to have fun, such as movies, sports complexes, and playgrounds. Speaking from personal experience, back in elementary school when our school teachers wanted to take us to see a film, they had to take us to Tehran, the capital of Iran, because there was no theatre in our city, Karaj, a rather big city next to Tehran. However, now there are three big cinemas in the town and my friends and I go to the movies almost every weekend. Therefore everyone can have enjoyment more leisurely which results in more pleasure in life.
To conclude, the world is a better place to live today, and people are more comfortable and have a lot more joy which makes them more content.
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion:
...more joy which makes them more content.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1977.66487455 80% => OK
No of words: 325.0 407.700716846 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87076923077 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82317375646 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566153846154 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.6003584229 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.3431516024 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.769230769 100.406767564 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.6045352989 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 5.45110844103 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138685649407 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589018423978 0.076458572812 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647050605208 0.0737576698707 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104399392776 0.150856017488 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0723160207608 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 58.1214874552 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.1575268817 128% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 86.8835125448 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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