It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why?
Learning is process of gain knowledge. No person need to attend school or read to get new knowledge. Since, learning can be done from various ways; we can learn from our life experiences, seeing outer world or reading the book. Different people have different positions regarding the way of learning; however, in my perspective learning gained from experiences it better than the learning from the book. I this essay I’ am going to write some reasons why I feel learning from the experiences is better than the learning from books with examples.
First of all, not everything learned thorough out or life is contained in a book. From the day we born we keep on learn the things by seeing and experiencing it. For instance, when a child is born he learn to eat, walk, speak seeing his parents activities. A child does not go to school or able to read any text. This example can makes us clear that learning is not what we only read in books, but its something what we see and experience in our life. Yes, one need to study various books, theories and ideas from others’ book so as to be best in his/her career. But, to be a human one does not need to go through the text book. For that she/he only has to realize from the things that happened in his life. Hence, learning is not limited on reading books that are prepared by some other people.
Second, knowledge from the books is needed in our jobs. For example, one engineer need to know various theories, methods and formulas to construct a house but that knowledge is not going help him to survive in life being social. So as to make clients an engineer need to be social, polite and admirable to everyone these skills are not learned in the books. Likewise, a person uses his knowledge from experiences everywhere in his life as to get happiness from every aspect of the life. Family happiness, bonding between friends etc can be obtained by the knowledge from the experience. Yes, it is true one need to go to school to learn basic ethics and moral behaviors to be social but not everything is taught in the school. When a person grows up he/she will automatically learn to become social and acceptable in the society. Otherwise he/she will be isolated from the society.
In conclusion, although one need to read books to be success in his life but so ad to be a real human and admirable by the all, one need to learn from the experience such that it will not only help them to solve the problem analytically and logically but also help them to be confident and audacious in life. Hence, for me learning from experience is far better and important in life rather only learning from text book written by other people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, likewise, regarding, second, so, as to, for example, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 15.1003584229 159% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 52.1666666667 151% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 483.0 407.700716846 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57556935818 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68799114503 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49542100878 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 212.727598566 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.447204968944 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 673.2 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7806810195 48.9658058833 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.0833333333 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.6045352989 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24637633651 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829330152276 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615919369085 0.0737576698707 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166877555349 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512048716788 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 86.8835125448 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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