It has recently been announced that a new movie theater may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
Living in a good neighborhood is very important to have a better life because it is where you spend most of your time. If they build a new movie theater nearby, there will be a lot of debate about it, some people may agree and some other may disagree. From my point of view, it is good to have a movie theater in our neighborhood for two reasons which I explain later.
First, a movie theater will provide new entertainment for people. There is not much choice (there are not many options) for having a good weekend in small towns. Watching movies is one of the interests of almost every one. It is a family entertainment, that is, People can go to watch a nice movie in a cinema with their family or friends and have a good time together on the weekends. For instance, when I was a high school student my favorite pastime was watching movies and I had a few friends who were the same as me. There was a movie theater near our school which changed its movies every other week. We would go to movies exactly at the first day when they started a new movie. I can remember a movie we saw those days, called "the last supper". It was a romance in which a woman who is a professor falls in love with a boy who is her student and at least 20 years younger. As I was a teenager and I had a romantic relationship with my first girl friend this movie seemed interesting to me so that after around 15 years I can easily recall its scenes. As you can see having a movie theater in your neighborhood can be entertaining and make unforgettable memories for you.
Second, a new movie theater is good for business in the surrounding area. A new movie theater attracts new people who are potential customers for the surrounding shops and restaurants. These new customers improve small businesses. For example, I used to have friend who had a fast food restaurant in a street that was not so crowded. The restaurant usually has about 20 customers a day so that it wouldn't cover its expenses. My friend was considering closing the restaurant and changing his business but he heard that a movie theater is going to be built in the street near (close) to his restaurant. So, he changed his mind and decided to bear the loss for a few years. After the movie theater was complete and started to show movies, just within a year not only all of his losses were offset but also he earned enough money to buy a new car and apartment. Without that movie theater my friend would never have made that much money.
Finally, building a movie theater will create new jobs. The theater Construction project will need different kind of people such as engineers, managers, architects, or construction workers. Even after the theater is finished they will have to employ new people to run it. This means that there will be new job opportunities. For example, on my way to work I used to pass a huge building that was under construction. It took around ten years to be finished. There were lots of people working there every day. Now it is a beautiful complex which consists of different parts including a shopping center and a movie theater. There are still people who work in the movie theater in order to provide service for customers. So, this movie theater provided jobs for many people hunting for jobs.
All things considered, a movie theater in your neighborhood would be a great addition. It provides a good pastime for people and more customers for stores and restaurants. Who doesn't like entertainment and more money? Be optimistic and support the idea of building a movie theater in our neighborhood.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, second, so, still, at least, for example, for instance, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 15.1003584229 232% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 23.0 11.0286738351 209% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 67.0 43.0788530466 156% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2940.0 1977.66487455 149% => OK
No of words: 648.0 407.700716846 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53703703704 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04537849152 4.48103885553 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63514281797 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 287.0 212.727598566 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.442901234568 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 905.4 618.680645161 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 37.0 20.6003584229 180% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5894355953 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4594594595 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5135135135 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.91891891892 5.45110844103 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 11.8709677419 194% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224442552885 0.236089414692 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066096490688 0.076458572812 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599588174671 0.0737576698707 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156206355366 0.150856017488 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367766716741 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 10.9000537634 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.01818996416 86% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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