It is important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends | TOEFL IELTS GMAT GRE SAT ACT PTE ESL

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It is important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.

Friends are among the vital persons of one's life. Friends are as important as our family members. Some poeple always look for making new friends. On the contarary, others tend to keep their own old friends. My firm conviction is that you have to save your current peers, instead of searching for neew peers. Our old buddies know us compeletly and also we have plenthora of sweet memories with them. In the following paragraph, I will delve into my perspective.
First crucial point to begin with is that our current friends know us deeply. Put differently, they already have a profound knowledge of our personalities and expectation of a friendship. You have spent days and nights on geting to know each others. Your old friends do not need you to explain yourselves or discuss the reasons of your attitude. You can just look them in the eyes and they will figure out what is going on in your minds. For instance, I have a friend whom I have known since the 9th grade. He guesses my thaughts and feelings only by talking to me on the phone. Hence, this type of relationship has not been built over a night. We have worked on it hard and we should perserve it for our own good.
Another worthwhile fact to bear in mind is that we have plenty of good memories with our peers. In other words, there is history between us which can not be exchanged for anything in the world. We have passed some of the specific time of our lives next to our peers which could never be exprience by someone else. Namely, when I was in hospital for doing a surgery on my knee, my best friend stayed next to me the whole time. We had fun in the hospital and he did not leave me alone. It is impossible for me to find a person who I would exprience that time again with. This memory is exclusivly belong to us and we talk about the old times in the hospital and laugh a lot at those days. Therefore, our history of friendship is some thing that we share through conversation and keep us even closer to our old fellas.
To sum up, the foregone conclusion is that we have to stick to our old peers and friends. The fact that our old fellas know us deeply, coupled with the point that there is a unique history between us, are two of the compelling reasons that strenghted my claim.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
Friends are among the vital persons of ones life. Friends are as important as our f...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...r anything in the world. We have passed some of the specific time of our lives next to our ...
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Line 3, column 728, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...Therefore, our history of friendship is some thing that we share through conversation and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, look, so, therefore, while, for instance, in other words, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 74.0 43.0788530466 172% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1838.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36579572447 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38062822126 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524940617577 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.59856630824 177% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4820352391 48.9658058833 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 70.6923076923 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1923076923 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191720839171 0.236089414692 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583412122021 0.076458572812 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743321224463 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133280827961 0.150856017488 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863998797794 0.0645574589148 134% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 58.1214874552 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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