Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
There is always a debate among scholars and even the public that older people do not enjoy their lives as much as younger people do. Some believe that it does not matter how old you are, you always can have fun. On the contrary, others think that once you get older, you cannot appreciate life as much as you used to do. My firm conviction is that younger people enjoy their lives more than the older ones do. It cannot be denied that people in their twenties do not spend much time on regretting the past and they are conspicuously healthier. Hence, they live their lives happily. I will delve into my perspective in detail through the following paragraphs.
First vital point to begin with is that the youth have not already make plethora of mistakes to feel bad about. In other words, young generation have not live that long in order to make wrong decisions, then feel sorry about them. Feeling regret is among the reasons that adults do not feel satisfaction in their lives. Namely, imagine a grandmother who spend life taking care of her children. Now she is old and alone and thinks of bad choices which she has made in the past. If she could travel in time, she would have lived differently. All these thoughts and feelings will taste bitter in her mouth. With respect to her regrets, she cannot enjoy her life. Therefore, the more we age, the less we can appreciate life.
Second, it is an accepted fact that younger persons are healthier than older ones. Put differently, it is in human nature that by growing up our body loses it abilities. When you are in your twenties you are energetic and vigorous. You can party with your friends till the midnight, without feeling exhausted. In contrast, when you are in you forties, you can barely stay awake till the midnight. Your body declines and dwindles by passing time. For example, ten years ago, I could manage to do my college assignments, go to my gym and exercise for two hours in a row, then go at my part time job in the campus café, and at the end of the night I would spend some quality time with my friends at a near bar! Now, I am approximately 35 years old and I cannot even imagine to live similar to the past. Thus, younger people still have the gift of a powerful body and they can count on it to enjoy their lives more than grown-ups.
To wrap up, the foregone conclusion is that the young generation acclaim life more than the old generation. The point that young individuals do not experience regret so much, coupled with the fact that they are healthier, are two compelling reasons that strengthen my claim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 583, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...e for two hours in a row, then go at my part time job in the campus café, and at the end ...
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Line 3, column 763, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'imagine living'.
Suggestion: imagine living
...ximately 35 years old and I cannot even imagine to live similar to the past. Thus, younger peop...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, in contrast, in other words, on the contrary, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 70.0 43.0788530466 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2122.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 469.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52452025586 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65364457471 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36319679793 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501066098081 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 654.3 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.9738809903 48.9658058833 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6153846154 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0384615385 20.6045352989 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73076923077 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292842507966 0.236089414692 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078781079234 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115675866745 0.0737576698707 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184189020367 0.150856017488 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990173887561 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.1575268817 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 86.8835125448 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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