Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
There is always a debate among scholars and even the public that older people do not enjoy their lives as much as younger people do. Some believe that it does not matter how old you are, you always can have fun. On the contrary, others think that once you get older, you can not appreciate life as much as you used to do. My firm conviction is that younger people enjoy their lives more than the older ones. It cannot be denied that people in their twenties do not spend much time on regretting the past and they are healthier. Hence, they live their lives happily. I will delve into my perspective in detail through the following paragraphs.
First vital point to begin with is that the youth have not already make plethora of mistakes to feel bad about. In other words, young generation do not live that long in order to make wrong decisions, then feel sorry about them. Feeling regret is among the reasons that adults do not feel satisfaction in their lives. Namely, imagine a grandmother who spend her life taking care of her children. Now she is old and alone and think of bad choices she has made in the past. If she could travel in time she would have lived differently. All these thoughts and feelings will taste bitter in her mouth. with respect to his regrets, she can not enjoy her life. Therefore, the more we age, the less we can appreciate life.
Second, it is an accepted fact that younger persons are healthier than older ones. Put differently, it is in human nature that by growing up our body looses it abilities. When you are in your twenties you are energetic and vigorous. You can party with your friends till the midnight, without feeling exhausted. In contrast, when you are in you forties, you can barely stay awake till the midnight. Your body decline and dwindle by passing time. For example, ten years ago, I could manage to do my college assignments, go to my gym and exercise for two hours, then go at my part time job in the campus cafe and at the end of the night I would spend some quality time with my friends at a near bar! Now I am approximately 35 years old and I can not even imagine to live similar to the past. Thus, younger people still have the gift of a powerful body and they can count on it to enjoy their life more than grown-ups.
To wrap up, it is foregone conclusion that the young generation acclaim life more than the old generation. The point that young individuals do not experience regret so much, coupled with the fact that they are healthier, are two compelling reasons that strengthen my claim.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: imagine living
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, second, so, still, then, therefore, thus, for example, in contrast, in other words, on the contrary, to begin with, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 9.8082437276 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2087.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 467.0 407.700716846 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46895074946 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64867537961 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32933536167 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490364025696 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 647.1 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.9439670607 48.9658058833 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2692307692 100.406767564 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9615384615 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73076923077 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298937003377 0.236089414692 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806067693606 0.076458572812 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112103684607 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18942932583 0.150856017488 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0883216038084 0.0645574589148 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 11.7677419355 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.002688172 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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