It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
Knowledge is power. Some froups of people think that there is no need to interfere of gathering world wides news, when we can live without them conveniently. Other groups may take the opposite sides. From my vantage point, I firmly believe that gaining the last news can be beneficial and practical for the individuals. In the following pragraphs, I will elaborate on my reasons by discussing two major facts among the countless ones.
Fristly we can take advantage by gathering information from news and events. We are able to predict the future and chage the situation for our benefits. It is true that when events are not related to our daily routines life we do not need to listen. As everybody knows the current news might not interfere in our life at the present day, but do we know it will not affect us in the future? Profound consideration enables us to think and act wisely and gain many useful benefit from the upcoming incidents. My brother's activity can illustrate this point clearly. Wy brother obsesses with the happening of world. He followes every news and talk shows to understand what is the economic condition will be in the future. He has stared inveesting a lot of money on bitcoin market. Bitcoin is digital tender, which people can buy and sell on the internet and it can be influenced by gold price and political atmosphiere around the world. He found out whenever the threar of war raises, the bitcoin price raises too. Obviously, the war risk does not affect his routines life, but he consider these kind of knowledge as a means to foresee the future and make better decission for buying or selling his bitcoin share at the right time.
Moreover, even though knowing the last news and events does not affect our life, it can change our viewpoints and broaden our horizons. Information can imapct our judgement and release us from solid thaughts. We are able to look at a problem from many diffrent angles and find the solutaion in a flexible attitude. Besides, we can share our ideas with more sophisticate people who do not care only to their surroundings. We can enjoy their campanionship and exchange our vieapoints towards latest news. When I was younger, during university time, we had a professor who was keen to the incidents around the world. He explained and intertrpreted latest news with burning enthusiasm, which engouraged us to participate in his discussion. But a few were able to compete with his speech. Only I could talk to him and chalanged his viewpoint with the help of my excessive knowledge and information. After a while an intensive arguments turned to collaboration and true friendship that lasted for many years.
In conclusion, gathering information about the world, even though does not impact our live, it will help us to predict the future and thik in a different angle.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'wides'' or 'wide's'?
Suggestion: wides'; wide's
...no need to interfere of gathering world wides news, when we can live without them con...
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Line 2, column 1076, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'considers'.
Suggestion: considers
...es not affect his routines life, but he consider these kind of knowledge as a means to f...
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Line 2, column 1085, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...fect his routines life, but he consider these kind of knowledge as a means to foresee the ...
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Line 3, column 482, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'towards the latest'.
Suggestion: towards the latest
...mpanionship and exchange our vieapoints towards latest news. When I was younger, during univer...
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Line 3, column 631, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'intertrpreted the latest'.
Suggestion: intertrpreted the latest
...ents around the world. He explained and intertrpreted latest news with burning enthusiasm, which eng...
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Line 3, column 921, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'argument'?
Suggestion: argument
...information. After a while an intensive arguments turned to collaboration and true friend...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, may, moreover, so, thus, while, in conclusion, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2346.0 1977.66487455 119% => OK
No of words: 486.0 407.700716846 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82716049383 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.69525374022 4.48103885553 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69175441639 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 260.0 212.727598566 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534979423868 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3926568466 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7857142857 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 5.45110844103 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148006811026 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356238141517 0.076458572812 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541251318874 0.0737576698707 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974003622409 0.150856017488 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469582426304 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 10.9000537634 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.01818996416 105% => OK
difficult_words: 121.0 86.8835125448 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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