It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work 5 days a week for shorter hours.
Throughout history, having an enjoyable and convenient job has been considerably important to human beings. One of the most significant facets of having a pleasant job is the number of days in a week that someone works. Whereas some people assert that having a job where someone works 3 days a week for long hours is more satisfying, others hold the opposite viewpoint and believe that working 5 days a week for shorter hours is less irritating. As far as I am concerned, the former point is relatively more gratifying. In what follows, I will elaborate on my point of view through two noticeable reasons.
The first reason coming to mind is concerned with the fact that when someone works only three days a week, he has the opportunity to use the rest of the week whatever/the way he wants. To put it another way, one might enjoy the rest of the week through travelling to many fascinating places in the country, spending much time with his family, and having a lot of fun with his friends. Moreover, if someone is a skillful person, he can make use of his talent in order to do other types of works in his neighborhood such as mending houses facilities, babysitting, or even farming.
Another significant point worth mentioning is that one can use the rest of the week as a recovery period in order to revert to his former condition. In other words, although some claim that working three times days a week for long hours can render someone more exhausted in such a way that he might become sick or at least very weak, others believe that he can lie down on the bed and sleep as much as he wants. As a result, it is clearly obvious that exhaustion of hard working can be removed throughout the rest of the week.
Based on the aforementioned reasons, we may conclude that working 3 days a week for long hours is of great benefit to employees. Not only do they have the opportunity to enjoy the rest of the week through traveling, spending time with their family and so on, they can also relax and regain their power completely. Plus, they might be able to make use of their talents in order to run other kinds of businesses in their neighborhood, as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...inesses in their neighborhood, as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, whereas, at least, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 391.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52941176471 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60813142687 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485933503836 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7545441838 48.9658058833 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.5 100.406767564 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9285714286 20.6045352989 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92857142857 5.45110844103 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380575940225 0.236089414692 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132930833722 0.076458572812 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.135343591609 0.0737576698707 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241346463631 0.150856017488 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.130032931539 0.0645574589148 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 58.1214874552 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.29 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 86.8835125448 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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