Workers are more satisfied when they have many different types of tasks to do during the workday than when they do similar tasks all day long.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There is no doubt that nowadays, finding a job relating to the skills and inherent talents is necessary that cause enjoy of doing it and present a situation for proving abilities. Some workers prefer to do similar tasks during the workday one. However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that the most important factor of works for workers is variety of their duties to pull them to itself. From my own perspective, the second belief is true. In what follows, I will pinpoint the most understanding reasons.
The first reason coming to mind to substantiate my standpoint is concerned with this issue that doing an uniform work all day long for several hours will cause the body to be tiered more and will provide physical pains that extremes by mental suffers because the human mind will recognize a work and after a while repeat it automatically without any thinking and make the body to be erosion more and more but if there be different tasks to do in this time, the mind will be active much more and there are challenges in that to help body do the work very good. for instance, my uncle was a worker for mayor for five years and his duty was cleaning the streets and he had to do one method for doing that in those years and he seemed older more than people who were much older than him in the real. so he decided to change his work to do farmer works for houses that was interesting and had enthusiastic to do them every day. this decision developed his mental and made him happy.
Another equally significant point is that doing different tasks make workers to learn more things around their fields of work and they will be professional in their expertieses. by this they have motivates to do new works and earn more money because if one person have some skills and know many things people will go the him to pick up for their works so it will make them popular among people.for example, I my self worked in a restaurant many years ago and early days i was just a waitress and got order from customers but after three months one the personals left there and i had to do more things such as washing dishes and doing cashier tasks and consequently my salary increased and had good effects on my living level and i could pay my university tuition.
In conclusion, i think it will be more satisfied for workers to do several tasks during their day and have some benefits for them and will alter their living as mentioned above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, may, second, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 27.0 13.8261648746 195% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2008.0 1977.66487455 102% => OK
No of words: 446.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50224215247 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36256489516 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497757847534 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 626.4 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.1344086022 184% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 174.878926372 48.9658058833 357% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 167.333333333 100.406767564 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1666666667 20.6045352989 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 5.45110844103 209% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.5376344086 235% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246453690823 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996744857121 0.076458572812 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893008914865 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165604304743 0.150856017488 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0265705656589 0.0645574589148 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 11.7677419355 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 58.1214874552 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.1575268817 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.41 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.0537634409 167% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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