Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Throughout the history, friendships have played a prominent role for every person. Due to its paramount importance knowing about how behavior to get more advantages from friends is very necessary. Some people may hold the view that having the ability to make many new friends easily will cause the happiness more than maintain will small number of people for a long period of time.However, some others may take an opposite viewpoint and believe that having fewer close friends for several times have more effects on our mental.I personally contend that the former beliefs in more better. In the following paragraph, I will elaborate on my idea through three noticeable reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that finding a good friend with the same attitude and have common thinking about different topic is too hard so if everybody expend some energy to find a good one he should try to keep him and continue on the whole of their life. Indeed, psychologist believe that having a good friend is valuable. for example, I have few friends from the university period and i tried to be familiar with them and analyzed them very much and recognized and choosed among several people the best one for my friendship.so the process of knowing a strange person is very time consuming and it is not easy not at all.
Another reason which deserves some words here is that friend is a key person for difficult situation of our life and we we have some body that give us the opportunity to say our secrets and mysteries will cause us to be more happy. one merit of having small number of friends for long time is that we can spend more time together and be aware of the weakness point and the strength point of each other that make us to talk more comfortable that is attribute to the measure of our closely. for instance, my mother have three friends from her school and they say everything and there is nothing that they hide from each other. and when my mother is upset they make a meeting and talk about it and give devise to my mother and help her. and this is feasible just by knowing each other completely.
The third reason is that there is truth between older friends. Nevertheless, some new friends may have some bad purpose to get close to us and it will have more time to find out it. so it is dangerous to bring every body in your private things.To illustrate this I can say about my brother that found a friend in a coffee and said about every private of himself to his new friend. my brother said that he has falled in love with be beauty girl and his friend used this and got friend with that girl that crushed my brother and he became depressed for several months.
In conclusion, this is my deep believe that having fewer friends is much more better than having a lot of new friends and this will have very advantages. fining friend is a hard procedure and and our happiness trace back to have a likely one that know him very good and can trust him that be relax when we are together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, third, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 13.8261648746 203% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 22.0 11.0286738351 199% => OK
Pronoun: 75.0 43.0788530466 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 52.1666666667 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2464.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 546.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51282051282 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34969336652 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448717948718 0.524837075471 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 781.2 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.1344086022 149% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.7005145153 48.9658058833 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.888888889 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 20.6045352989 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05555555556 5.45110844103 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.5376344086 325% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245406896538 0.236089414692 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750005651872 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657411331052 0.0737576698707 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145895033575 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659820121806 0.0645574589148 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.47 10.9000537634 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 86.8835125448 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.0537634409 139% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.