It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Work is one of the most defining aspects of our lives. we spent our most of times in our offices or working facilities doing various kind of things that we sometimes forget that we have private lives, families, and most importantly our own well beings. personally, i believe that it is much more preferable to have a job with long duration that has a schedule of three days a week. I feel this way for two reasons, which i will explain the following essay.
First of all, if working day is only three days a week, we would have more time to do various things. most jobs are five days a week worldwide that we only have two days for free from our jobs. if three days jobs are possible, then we would have four days of our own that we improve our private lives and take care of our families. my personal experience is a compelling example of this. when i was a University student, i had a full time job, which is a research job that i had to go to lab for three days, but the working hours were long such as from 7 a.m to 10 p.m. even though i was working while i was studying, the working in research lab transferred to my stem major's several credits. As a result i had almost four days of free time that i could improve my personal interest of piano playing. sometimes when i had feeling that i need a rest, i just rested for four days straight. but now after graduation, i'm working as a 9 to 5 worker that i feel like i have very little free time to pursue other things because working time even though it is not much longs hours compared to my previous job, it usually blocks day's most valuable times.
Secondly, people get bored easily by doing repetitive jobs that in turn it affects their ability to downgrade. Imagine that repeating same time or sitting in front of computer for five days straight and take two days rest till your retirement. For me it is one of the most boring experiences because i'm a person with many interests that i feel like i don't like my major and job anymore because of doing same thing that takes your almost all days of a week. Instead, working only three days even though with longs hours will probably refresh a worker and his or her performance may even increase. For instance, my parents are self employed that they only open their market for three or fours days a week. From my perspective, their work is so boring, and one time asked from my parents that whether they get bored. The answer they gave me was that they said if they worked for five days or seven days straight they would have already given up on that market, but their current schedule is so flexible and short that they even love their markers more and even want to improve their market.
In conclusion, i strongly believe that working three days with longs hours a week is much better. this is because a worker has more time of his or her own and it will refresh and improve a worker psychologically.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 24.0 11.0286738351 218% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 91.0 43.0788530466 211% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2367.0 1977.66487455 120% => OK
No of words: 546.0 407.700716846 134% => OK
Chars per words: 4.33516483516 4.8611393121 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.83390555256 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31832540712 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.430402930403 0.524837075471 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 729.0 618.680645161 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7134442083 48.9658058833 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.714285714 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.6045352989 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.7619047619 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.5376344086 488% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387485891597 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138576807084 0.076458572812 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101270351459 0.0737576698707 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.254289244823 0.150856017488 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0749724405713 0.0645574589148 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.47 58.1214874552 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.19 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.01818996416 90% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.