It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Job satisfaction is an essential need to meet the needs of contemporary life. Many people thus propose that engaging in a job with non-ordinary conditions like working for long hours is desirable, while people think just performing a job matters.
While having a job is undoubtedly the most important part of the issue, I disagree one employs in a short-term job weekly but for long hours daily, rather one can have drastic feedback by having more days in a week but for short hours in a day.
To begin with, working for long hours undergoes one's physical condition overwhelming pressure. Some physical damages stem from extraordinary body pressure. In other words, working for long hours weakens body circumstances and atrophies a person's abilities gradually. Undoubtedly, not having a normal physical condition will impact others' aspects of life.
My experience is a compelling example of this. During the Master's period, I had to work on some days for over ten hours a day, because I wanted to advance my project simultaneously. After some months, I ceased because of some physical diseases arising from body overactivities. I was diagnosed by muscular damages. So my project was left behind too. Had not I been over-activated for days, I would not procrastinate on my project.
Furthermore, working for long hours is a major influence on reducing mental concentration. Knowingly, not having focus contributes to having ineffective feedback. Recent research at an American neuroscience institute has suggested that working for long hours in a day, detrimentally, impacts an area in the brain in which logical and computational problems are processed. So working for long hours hurts one's mental health.
In conclusion, working for long hours destroys some aspects of one's life. Not only does it affect our physical health but also it decreases focus on issues mentally. People should not press themselves by doing jobs in which ideal conditions have been ignored.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: ONES
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
...for long hours destroys some aspects of ones life. Not only does it affect our physi...
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 13.8261648746 36% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 43.0788530466 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1661.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 317.0 407.700716846 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23974763407 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05090540066 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 212.727598566 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564668769716 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 53.122405819 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.05 100.406767564 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.85 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.425136207547 0.236089414692 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117315529943 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106784006021 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.231485058242 0.150856017488 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100224176572 0.0645574589148 155% => OK
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.01818996416 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.