It is more important to keep your old friend than it is to make new friends. Do you agree or disagree?
There are differing opinions on whether it is more important to keep old friends than to make new friends. Some people think one should try to keep old friends bt any means, for they think old friends are an important part of memorable memories and one may be dependent spiritually and mentally. Other people, however, argue that it is beneficial to make new friends than it is to keep old friends. In my view, I strongly believe that one should try to find and to make new friends for two compelling reasons.
To begin with, friendships is one of the most significant occurrences in our life because it gifts us a sense of belonging and this itself impress our mental health effectively. Meanwhile, Making new friends causes ones to learn new and more issues in one's life and it causes to increasing in the expansiveness of one's view horizon and more learnings and new experiences. Not only do they spend time with each other, but also do they learn many issues with each other. So certainly having new friends helps new learnings too. The only problem is that new friends need time to familiar with each other. No longer will not it solved because essentially we are the ones who are flexible in social communications. We are able to adapt to new circumstances and we can associate with new people. Indeed everyone has its own mysterious inside world and has its own thoughts and the way of thinking or in a word its own ideology. So potentially everyone has many valuable human merits to know. During social interactions like making friend, ones can teach each other their understandings and findings reciprocally. If we suffice to old friends we won't able to discover new people and we won't capture new worlds and we won't augment its learnings.
Furthermore, making new friends causes to enlarge social relationship's domain. The more one expands its own social relationships the more one has more chance to solve its problems. Naturally, some of our problems need other hands to solve. For instance, assume the one who makes new friends in any kind of conditions like making a friend on travels or making a friend online then when he gets in trouble he will have more possibilities of bits of help in such difficulties.
In sum, making new friends has useful beneficiaries for us. Not only we can teach more and new things from new people, but also we have new possibilities to solve our problems in miscellaneous situations.one should consider the advantages of making new friends and enlarging our social circles in our life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...es ones to learn new and more issues in ones life and it causes to increasing in the...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Indeed,
...s and we can associate with new people. Indeed everyone has its own mysterious inside ...
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Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enlarging'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: enlarging
... Furthermore, making new friends causes to enlarge social relationships domain. The more o...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'relationships'' or 'relationship's'?
Suggestion: relationships'; relationship's
...ng new friends causes to enlarge social relationships domain. The more one expands its own so...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...larging our social circles in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, while, for instance, kind of, in my view, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2112.0 1977.66487455 107% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82191780822 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78311251455 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46803652968 0.524837075471 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 646.2 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2772849486 48.9658058833 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.571428571 100.406767564 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09523809524 5.45110844103 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342106010335 0.236089414692 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127032248206 0.076458572812 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126194457773 0.0737576698707 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249053174743 0.150856017488 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976103398951 0.0645574589148 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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