It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Do you agree or disagree?
A friend is one of the most important people in human life. People cannot live without a friend happily but they have to be careful to choose a friend. From my perspective, old friends are always better than a new one and I strongly agree with this statement for the following reasons.
Firstly, Old friends are the most trustworthy. Old friends know me very much than a new one. If I keep my old friends in my life then it will be a more important decision. For example: During my childhood, I was in a village because of my father's job posting. I had a lot of friends and I liked their attitudes and personality. They also loved me and gave me much important knowledge which was necessary for my life. After the transfer of my father's job place, I kept communication with my old friends. At the new place, I got new friends from new school and I figured out that my old friends were good inasmuch as they understood me well. After that, I made a reunion party with my first school friends to buttress the relation.
Secondly, Old friends are the initial friends of life. If we keep them in our life then intimacy will be increased between ourselves and they will also be happy. For instance, Once I had got a full funded admission offer letter from Michigan state university. Before going to pursue my higher study, I had communicated with all university friends and made a hangout. They were so happy to know my good news and one of my friend told me, " Friend, please do not forget us, we are proud of you". Then I realized if I forget them then surely they will be sad and it will be a great loss in my life.
Thirdly, Old friends are the blessing of a human because they will not do anything that will destroy your reputation. As I remembered, During my post-graduate time, I had some new friends from different countries. One of my friends was very much jealous of me and he did a lot of bad activities against me. As they were my new friend and it was so difficult to understand them that’s why I was in trouble.
Finally, Though it is difficult to make a lucid explanation to justify the statement, I would like to conclude that it is very important to keep an old friend for the above reasons.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 72.0 43.0788530466 167% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1977.66487455 92% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43795620438 4.8611393121 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60903954295 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459854014599 0.524837075471 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1063180813 48.9658058833 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3043478261 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8695652174 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.45110844103 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284159140101 0.236089414692 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097059406924 0.076458572812 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709970640529 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174987981655 0.150856017488 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042884328794 0.0645574589148 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 86.8835125448 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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