Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Working Is an important part of our lives. As we spend big time in our daily life at work, we always try to make our work successful and joyful. Some people think it is better to work with a group of people on a team, others prefer to work independently. In my view, it is much better to work on a team. I will try to elaborate on the notion behind this in the next few words.
First, working on a team is definitely more effective. When a group of people works together, they may get benefits from their different skills. Moreover, working on a team has fewer mistakes and more new ideas. For instance, last year, I was working as an intern doctor with a group of other interns in the University Hospital. The professor asked us to translate a research study and give a presentation about it. The study was huge, so it was impossible for one person to finish all of the work alone. We decided to organize the workload between us. So, five of us did the translation part, and another one, who was the best in English, controlled our work. Another intern, who was fast at typing, made the slides. Finally, one of us did the presentation at the meeting. It was very successful and we got great marks. Eventually, working with a group of people is much better.
Second, Working on a team is more fun than working alone. As we can break the routine with different activities, We can have a great time during work. Humans always tend to be social and to be with other people. For example, my father is working at an international company with a team of five people. He tends to spend a lot of time with his workmates. Last month, he had to work in a different position for three weeks. Although he was working within the same company, he struggled a lot during these three weeks. He was feeling bored most of the time and tried a lot to go back to work with his friends. He used to be very active and to be the first one at work. However, when he had to work alone, he started to be late and lazy at work. As a result, working with a team is clearly better than working alone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, for example, for instance, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 52.1666666667 123% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1977.66487455 85% => OK
No of words: 393.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28244274809 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45244063426 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43435262117 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.470737913486 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.59856630824 156% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.6003584229 136% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.0982879661 48.9658058833 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.1071428571 100.406767564 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.0357142857 20.6045352989 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.53405017921 66% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358325237456 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12103048699 0.076458572812 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948507556721 0.0737576698707 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265837883632 0.150856017488 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313705503561 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 11.7677419355 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.95 10.9000537634 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.94 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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