Is it more important to be able to work with a group of people on a team or to work independently? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer.
Work is the most essential and inevitable part of our life nowadays. It is the most important factor for anyone to lead a happy and a fulfilling life. According to me, it is more important for an individual to be able to work with a group of people on a team rather than working independently for several reasons.
First, a team is full of different sets of people. If you are working in a team you are obviously learning more. If a problem comes then every individual has a different methods to see and deal with the problems. Some people panic, some remain calm and some sees the problem as a challenge. Working with the people teaches you how differently you can react when the problem comes.
For instance, I work in an IT firm as a software engineer. Our team is of around 20 people from different areas of the country. Earlier we didn’t have any process of analysing work, getting reviews, documenting it and estimating how much efforts will be required. Eventually, as our team grow this task was becoming difficult. And one of my team member one day suggested to implement the method of SCRUM to have a standup regularly in the morning where everybody discusses about the work they are doing and how far they have progressed. As you can see, implementing this has remarkably benefited our team and our overall work pressure.
Second, a team is not just to do work but it is also there whenever you need help in your personal and professional work. If you have some urgent work at home then your team can provide a back support to you by handling all the urgent work. Working in team helps to lower down your burden and gives you the option to discuss any work related problem with each other. In this way, you can come to an healthy conclusion to a difficult problem.
For example, I remember when we were working late night with our team in office to deliver the project. One of my teammates phone rang, it was her mother telling him that his brother is very sick and immediately needs to go to the hospital. We all stood up to told him to not worry about the release and go take care of his brother first. We as a team divided his task among ourself and did a successfully release of the project. That’s how we get benefited working together.
To sum up, I would really suggest every one to work in team rather than alone. Some people think that working in team will make their work slow. But as popularly said, If you want to go far walk together otherwise walk alone. Speed of work might decrease but the quality of work will definitely going to be improved. And as we all know, the quality of work is always more important than the quantity of work. It is going to help us learn more from each other experiences and make us all Future Ready.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'method'?
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
...blem comes. For instance, I work in an IT firm as a software engineer. Our team i...
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Message: Did you mean 'firms'?
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...iews, documenting it and estimating how much efforts will be required. Eventually, a...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested implementing'.
Suggestion: suggested implementing
...cult. And one of my team member one day suggested to implement the method of SCRUM to have a standup r...
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Suggestion: a
...ach other. In this way, you can come to an healthy conclusion to a difficult probl...
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Message: You used an adverb ('successfully') instead an adjective, or a noun ('release') instead of another adjective.
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...but the quality of work will definitely going to be improved. And as we all know, the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, then, for example, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 55.0 43.0788530466 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2273.0 1977.66487455 115% => OK
No of words: 507.0 407.700716846 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.483234714 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.74517233601 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48670941725 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483234714004 0.524837075471 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 716.4 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7325435842 48.9658058833 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3793103448 100.406767564 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4827586207 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.89655172414 5.45110844103 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.85842293907 233% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.368831733099 0.236089414692 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106840503296 0.076458572812 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0935478572835 0.0737576698707 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206649548606 0.150856017488 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0787935165302 0.0645574589148 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 11.7677419355 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 10.9000537634 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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