It is obvious that humans have various views and attitudes towards different issues because of the fact they grow up and are trained in dissimilar conditions. Although some assert that it is more important to read or watch news presented by people whose thoughts and opinions are similar to their own, I strongly believe that it is better for them to follow the news presented by people who have different perspectives and views from them. in the following paragraphs, I will discuss my view using some reasons and examples.
I think that in general, individuals have views about different matters that have learned and are taught in their family. If they read and listen to others’ attitudes which are opposite to their own views, it will give them a good opportunity to think and study these issues more. Therefore, it may lead them to make better decisions and to change their views about those. In other words, if they do not allow themselves to pay attention to opposite views, it is possible that they pursue the path which is not beneficial for them. for example, my friend has grown up in a family who were racist; thus, he was also had the similar view to their family members. When he entered university, he gave himself a chance to listen to people who had different attitudes about this issue. As a result, he decided to alter his views about that because he realized that his opinions were not reasonable.
Moreover, I believe that when people read and watch the news which contains different views from their views, it will help them to increase their knowledge about diverse issues. In fact, it will broad their sights and enable them to understand different subjects better. if they only confine themselves to read views which are similar to their own, they will deprive themselves of reading different attitudes. In other words, when they listen to various view, it will provide them with a proper opportunity to compare views that are opposite to each other and to improve their knowledge about different issues. For instance, I personally not only pursue views which are similar ti my own but also give attention to opposite views. Hence, it has helped me to have more information about various perspectives.
To sum up, in my point of view, it is much more beneficial for humans to read views which are different from their own due to the fact that it will cause them to increase their knowledge about various issues so that it will help them to make better decisions and select the best and rational view.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in fact, in general, as a result, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 25.0 11.0286738351 227% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 78.0 43.0788530466 181% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 1977.66487455 106% => OK
No of words: 438.0 407.700716846 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79223744292 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46464650446 2.67179642975 92% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 212.727598566 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.41095890411 0.524837075471 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 648.9 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 9.59856630824 198% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.51792114695 199% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1291106273 48.9658058833 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.470588235 100.406767564 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7647058824 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.45110844103 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268769043371 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950377135625 0.076458572812 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115402310335 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205517260931 0.150856017488 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113174131481 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 58.1214874552 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 86.8835125448 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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