Throughout History, people all around the world have tried to follow news from the other people, newspaper, TV and social media. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether following news by people whose views are similar to our own views or people with different viewpoints. I personally contend that following news by people with different viewpoint is more important and beneficial. I will elaborate on my point of view through the following paragraphs.
The first reason coming to mind about my idea is that listening to the news presented by people whose views are not similar to people who are watching the news helps the people consider a news from the other aspect and this can lead a person to think more a bout a happening or news. For instance last week I listen a news about sea pollution from one my friend whose views is simiar to me and she told me that the cause of this pollution is the government but after that I heard that news from my dad whose views is diffrent from me and he told me that the cause of this polution was a private company which throw away their trash to the sea and this company do not attention to the government warn.
The second reason I would like to bring about my opinion is that following news by people with different view point help people to leran more about a happening and help people to get more information about a particular subject. A recent research in 2017 at Tehran university of Medical Sciences by Dr Ansari about the quantity and quality of information people can gain during watching news on newspaper, Dr Ansari and et al found that people who watch TV news presented by people with different idea get more information about an event or a happening that people who follow news presented by people with similar view point.
As a result, all the aforementioned reasons lead us to the conclusion that watching or listening to the news presented by people with different viewpoint is more beneficial and is more useful for people and this helps them to get more information about a subject or news and helps people to consider a news from several aspects. All in all, it is highly recommend to people to listen and watch the news presented by people whose view is different from them.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...information about a particular subject. A recent research in 2017 at Tehran university of Medical...
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...ct or news and helps people to consider a news from several aspects. All in all, it is...
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...veral aspects. All in all, it is highly recommend to people to listen and watch the news ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, regarding, second, so, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 13.8261648746 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1884.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66336633663 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53479849523 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 212.727598566 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.403465346535 0.524837075471 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 574.2 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.59856630824 31% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.1344086022 199% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 117.434407224 48.9658058833 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.4 100.406767564 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.4 20.6045352989 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466910238592 0.236089414692 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.231980070534 0.076458572812 303% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105274218891 0.0737576698707 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.319811518271 0.150856017488 212% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036614062831 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.7 11.7677419355 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.8 58.1214874552 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.1575268817 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.01818996416 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.0537634409 179% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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